Please comment so I know how to get better...

I don't really get why they're toasters!

Here's a critique on the aesthetics of the design, though:

Definitely too much negative space. Maybe make both toasters bigger, and add something to the sky?

Also, the wings look a little like hands.

The pose of the icarus toaster could also be improved, I think. It took me a second to realize he was falling; it looks like he's gliding downward. I think giving him another posture that looks more like 'Alright, I'm falling' would look better.

But that's just me, dunno how you feel~

being a latin nerd, i love this!!!! fix the wings and add some more feathers or something... and i agree that the toaster does not look like it's falling but looks as if it is flying. add something to fill up the space.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/25731/Culture_Clashes_Even_in_the_Games_World

Either I'm too old or the art just isn't doing it, but does this help: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/After_Dark_%28software%29

Obviously some people get this, but I don't..guess I better study my classics. That aside, I think I agree that it needs to be bigger, and the smoke needs to be more smoky. My first impression was that it was some crooked legs.



Critique mine please?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25755/Broken_Time

nice idea mess around with it some more

Here is my second stab at the rise and fall of the flying toaster. I moved the flying toaster closer to the feather trail to unify the image more and lifted its wings, then I popped the faceplate off the crashed toaster and broke off one of its wings. Critiques are greatly appreciated.

haha, that's cool now that I've seen the after dark thing.

I was born in 1990, so that was probably long forgotten by the time I was cognizant.

If others will understand it, the design is awesome.

Maybe add some toast.

NOW WITH TOAST!

Amazing. Brings back so many memories

i really like the burnt toast, its a good addition. the broken wing isnt totally clear perhaps bring it closer together while still broken

AFTER DARK GAMES?? love it!!

TOASTER RUN!

My only concern about it right now is the negative space. See how empty the shirts look? Could you rearrange them in such a way to keep the exact meaning, yet making the two images the same?

I think that'd make it look way cooler.

Hopefully this should cut down on the negative space a bit. I also pulled the broken wing in a bit.

I dont get the joke, but the placement looks much better here.



Critique mine please:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/26127/Paint_your_own_world

The feathers are a bit large, wouldn't you be able to see individual feathers on the wings if they were that big. Also the artwork on the toaster and the wings looks a bit sloppy in general, I'd like to see it neater, like the toast.