Dispose of all your wild flowers! Do it now!!

Needs What? Write it Down. Speak up or just hit Submit This! :)

By the way, this was done with a mouse, all in photoshop.. I dare to do the the same, c'mon I dare you! Wow, it's late.....................

Only thing I recommend is some detail on the flower....



I love it!

Thanks stitched, v2 is on the way.

What's behind the flower?

A bed with a person sleeping. Light from the window shadows the wall and the person sleeping in the bed.

ok. My suggestions:

give the bed a slightly different perspective so that is s clearer that it is a bed.

I don't like the frame, i'm sre you used it to separate the space where the flower is and the bed, to add depth but I think it isn't working, the has very clean lines, whereas the fra,me is sketchy, I just don't think it goes well with the rest. id use a door opening to separate both levels or no separation at all , in which case you would need to rework the lights.

The rest is good, i would personaly make the pot a bit smaller so that it doesn't take so much unnecesary space.

I can't speak my mind very well in english when it comes to complex thing, but I hope you understand my point of view.

Thanks for critique Petanca! Before submitting V2 I would like to know if anyone else feels that the bed and perspective is not clear before I make major changes.

I'm not sure what you mean by door seperation or levels. The flower is meant to be in the same room as his sleeping victim, but look closely at the shadows and you can see the flowers shadow on the wall above the head of the bed.

Maybe I can add a foot sticking out of the bottom of the sheets and make a headboard above the the bead. This would distiguish the light and perspective.

Sorry, it's my english, it's the same level but the flower is a lot closer to the expectator, so I guess you used the frame to separate that. I don't know how he rest feels about this?

i think petanca is referring to foreground/background. i agree with her feedback that the frame is not successful. i also didn't understand what was going on in the background. to use a door for separation could potentially work, or you could have the room be open to the shirt background and terminate organically.



personally, this design isn't my cup of tea, but i don't think that means you shouldn't submit. kick it around some more, see what happens.



for what it's worth, my first reaction to the design was, "how can it be a potted wildflower? doesn't that make it... not wild?"

I thought of having the flower outside of the window looking in but the window would not go well on a t-shirt so I brought it in the room. I am rethinking the door idea as the frame but many people do not like squared frames on a tee.

Wild flower is just the type of flower but I get your meaning.

oh no, i agree, son't make the door boxy. try it at an angle, with both the frame and the open door visible. that paired with the flower in the foreground should help avoid a boxy composition.

V2 Finally!

Any more ideas before I go ahead and submit?

I have seen 'wild flower' done a few times, this is not bad and the figure in the bg works better.



Not sure about the 'split' looking pot, what's going on there? seems to be in two pieces. Perhaps a simpler pot would be less destracting, focus more on the flower.



Also, he could look meaner. At the moment he is too sweet.



I really like the knife and light from the window.

It's more like those crazy grins.

hey, this is Cooooooool! :)

I love it!

Don't change anything anymore!

Looks great just like this!

cool ,CHECK OUT MINE

Haha.. Cool idea!



Score mine (:

nice one

Its pretty cool... specially like the evil smile on its face... please check and comment on mine as well...



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