I didn't want my last dandelion design to die, so here is another shot at the pun. this is my first sketch.

the circles on stems are dandelions btw.

massive potential here. I like the pun, i think it could make an awesome shirt. gl





crt me please:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25786/Molecular_Destruction

nice idea. this sketch has some real potential. i like the layout and look forward to seeing how it develops. i'll wait to add opinions until it is a little further along. since you are in beginning stages.

thanks a lot. i should start planning the colors and the vectorizing soon.

looks like the featured shirts that volcom does. lots of potential. needs some color and some digital work.



check mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/25769/Brownchickenbrowncow

this is playing a bit with color. i grabbed the mane off of the original design and really like it, but maybe it needs to be more like my sketch?

original: http://www.threadless.com/submission/163354/Dandelion/showmore,designs

this looks a lot better!

if you add the dandelions at the end of the stems that would be nice

Yeah, I liked it more sketchy, even the child-like structure lines made it very cool looking, but clean doent look bad either and I like the colours.



please critique mine too: http://www.threadless.com/critique/25673/As_fresh_as_it_gets

hmm. there is something nice about the clean version, but i'm not so sure. :(

i'll wait for some more comments. thanks you two!

You just need to add more dandelions flying off all the way up the shirt and you're good.

i think it's a greate idea

my suggestion is add a little more substance to the grass.

oh right now those are stems, not grass. i have to figure out which look i like best. thanks for all of your suggestions. i really appreciate it.

All the dandelion things are behind his head, so maybe you could put some on top of his head too.

i like it!

i think if you combined version one with this version it would be ultimately awesome. i'd also consider some other shirt colors. but i love the character!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/25079/Pizza_Face

this is how the character is progressing. thanks for everyone's input. i'm going to finish up the design and then see what an alternative mane would look like, so stay tuned for the comparison.



what do you all think so far of this?

I think this is great. Id submit as is on a Navy T. Great job!!!

Pls comment on my design. Thanks

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25805/Polar_Fiction

positioning?

hm i like both..

does the left one warp around to the back?

center. this is really cool, man.

it does wrap around, but i feel if it were going there.. i'd need more going up the middle.

electrics! are you out there anywhere?

i agree, if you are going to have the design at the bottom, you need to have some seeds floating up or something, like in the first drafts of your original.

(but i like it in the middle too) :D

thanks, i'll work on that.

Yes this is very nice. The center position is the best, IMO

I also like the center. It's very cool.

In think the center design works just fine. Awesome idea.

actually this is the finalized version.

nice! looks great, sub it

Looks good to go. I could pick which placement I like better from before. I like both. Sub Away.



Would you all please give my guitar design a look at?

submitted!

awwhh...so adorable! cute idea.



well i see you've already submitted so my comment isnt of much use; but i'd appreciate it if you could give me some critique on my design.





http://www.threadless.com/critique/25832/gretel_likes_to_cut_and_paste

AW I LOVE IT.

YES.

wow. this has come along! great work! i can't think of anything to fix on this anymore.

could you take a look at my newest update?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25682/Love_Hurts

aww this is cute.

I love it, I would buy it if it gets printed @_@

Great! It will get my vote. A high one. ;)

i like this a lot... missed the critique totally but i was going to say that the dandelion tail was kinda overkill in my eyes.

but that's it.

so don't let me get you down, this is coolness

I really like this. I love the idea too.

If you get a chance, could you take a look at my design?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25928/Keepin_it_Real

Thanks :)

thanks everyone! i'm glad to hear you all like it. i submitted it on friday, so it should be up soon. :)

can't wait to see :D

:)

in the mean time, i have another design in the running.

hope you like it: http://www.threadless.com/submission/172967/Monkey_Business

this is awesome, good job.

Cute.

its uppppp!!!!!!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/173463/the_dandeLion

Man I love the ideas people come up with!!! Submit to the Threadless Gods and await your fate.



Critique me please!