deffo need colour and depth. Put an actual fisherman in there, fuzz the hair up, and have n0.5 as his beard, and 4&6 could be his chops! and the rest could be his hair, or you could have a big wave coming over his shoulder and an octopus on his head doing a knot with its leggy things, and and... calm down.
could go to town really, but start with a bit of colour and then see from there. hehe.
Like the concept, but think this would be funnier as a beard just below the neck line. Also, the back text should be on the front and made to look more like diagram boxes with background and a thin double border line. The typeface is perfect.
Thanks for the suggestions, I think I might try to go the beard direction as I want the emphasis to be on the hair and so a fisherman character might be a bit much/distracting though I'm not sure. Plus I'll start adding some colours
but something is missing i think..
it looks a little empty