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v1 A fisherman's bad hair day, current version








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elected
elected on Jul 31 '08
yes i really like this :) it's a great idea!

but something is missing i think..

it looks a little empty
chelly
chelly on Jul 31 '08
are these only used by fishermen or also ppl who go boating/camping? some color and texture would help. great start.
jschoey2
jschoey2 on Jul 31 '08
deffo need colour and depth. Put an actual fisherman in there, fuzz the hair up, and have n0.5 as his beard, and 4&6 could be his chops! and the rest could be his hair, or you could have a big wave coming over his shoulder and an octopus on his head doing a knot with its leggy things, and and... calm down.



could go to town really, but start with a bit of colour and then see from there. hehe.
renwalker
renwalker on Jul 31 '08
Like the concept, but think this would be funnier as a beard just below the neck line. Also, the back text should be on the front and made to look more like diagram boxes with background and a thin double border line. The typeface is perfect.
cheripoffs
   cheripoffs on Jul 31 '08
Thanks for the suggestions, I think I might try to go the beard direction as I want the emphasis to be on the hair and so a fisherman character might be a bit much/distracting though I'm not sure. Plus I'll start adding some colours
zenbolic vision
zenbolic vision on Jul 31 '08
nice idea! just needs,,, some inking ofcourse, and hmm maybe some highlights but keep on it! and add some features shows its a head

crit mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/25723/electro
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