What do you guys think?

haha I like this! the banjo monkey's expression his hilarious.

the only thing I'm unsure about is the orange oval underneath them--try it without and see if it looks better. I dunno, it could go either way.



you should try it on a couple other shirt colors, too.

thanks for your answer, i'll try without it!

Looks better?

what i like least is that i can't look at the design for very long because of the animation, it's quite bothersome.



however, i do like it. i like monkeys, i like music, i like this shirt. i might like it better with a lower placement.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/25704/t_shirt

Advices taken! Anything else?

I would take the emotion lines away from the middle monkey's head, I think it's pretty promising though. nice



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/25705/Dangerous_Materials

Latest version. Comments?

Awesome imagery, and I like the irony, but it isn't my style.



I'd say either move it up in the shirt or fill the negative space around the chest with something..it's too empty up therr.

That's sweet, I personally like different placements than just the chest all the time.



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aw I kinda liked the lines around the funny monkey's head. it lent to the mood, I think.



and def move it up to the chest like jellyes said.



it does look better without the orange circle, too.

looking good!

i agree with you, the lines added something, i'll put them back



i'm not sure about the placement though.. i kind of like it that way



what do you folks think? would you like it better on the chest?

anyone here?

I like the placement, and the illustration. On the subject matter though I wonder about racial overtones a bit, probably unintended but still made me think of it a bit.

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thank you guys

just show both placements when you sub, it'll work out.



yeah, I can kinda see what moose means about the racial undertones. i know it wasn't intended, but you should probably change the title.

Latest (final?) version. What do you think?

Latest (final?) version. What do you think?

Why so low? The placement of the first was awesome! Fix and submit!

Really cool... I like the movement you've created. It sort of buzzes :)

This is a great illustration, and I love the colors you chose.

One thing i would suggest is to display it on a plain background, and maybe show it on a real tee. The dots really distract attention away from your work.



Crit mine if you have a moment:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25290/Animal_Kingdom#v5

yeah - the illustration is ace



lose the shoddy placement presentation - throw it on a real model and you'll be all set

^ I second this and give you an A+.

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That is sic!!! Nice work my friend, the illustration is amazing. SUB!!!

yeah, this is great! ready to be subbed for sure!

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http://www.threadless.com/critique/25942/dancing_with_life

I really like it!

this one's ready.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/25704/t_shirt#v2

great artwork!

Awesome illustration!

Change the presentation slightly (as has been suggested) and you are ready.

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