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v1 Rise Up from the Funk, current version








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asher27
   asher27 on Jul 27 '08
From the sketchbook... tediously hand copied in illustrator. There's a ton of detail in it, the preview size doesn't really do the design justice.



bigger version in black/white... http://asher27.deviantart.com/art/Rise-Up-from-the-Funk-92910285



I'm thinking this plum colour on creme, or perhaps white or silver, or black on white or silver.



One colour, obviously.
asher27
   asher27 on Jul 27 '08
Any comments besides don't submit?



I'm pretty sick of the cutesy stuff myself, but I guess the rest of threadless isn't.
carrotliver
carrotliver on Jul 27 '08
wow. that is a great shirt, i love the colors too!

that is a great work... maybe a little bit of touch up, but i dont think so...

I would wear this.

please, review mine!
carrotliver
carrotliver on Jul 27 '08
oh, you know what?

make the water drop foil, that would really be cool!

also, do the plum on cream
asher27
   asher27 on Jul 27 '08
Funny, as you commented on mine I was commenting on yours. The water drop being foil could be interesting, but I don't think if this were to get picked for printing threadless would think its worth it.
carrotliver
carrotliver on Jul 27 '08
Thanks for the ideas, i agree with you. If you submit this, i would vote for it!
asher27
   asher27 on Jul 27 '08
bump bump bump...



any suggestions on what to change if anything at all?
asher27
   asher27 on Jul 27 '08
more bumping...
asher27
   asher27 on Jul 27 '08
I've come to the conclusion that I'm impatient...

So, some more bumping. If your rate that it needs work, please tell me what.
MobChaos
MobChaos on Jul 27 '08
That's badass SUB.



Please critique my design "UH OH" if you get time thanx.
asher27
   asher27 on Jul 27 '08
Yeah so I got a bit fed up with waiting for feedback and decided to throw this to the wolves... I mean put this up for voting.



BTW threadless employees - I'm sorry I submitted this for voting 3 times... I kept on getting a blank page so I didn't think it went through... so disregard two of them.
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orangehead
   orangehead on Aug 16 '08
i'm loving the thick black lines at the bottom, and i think the arm would look cooler if you continued with the thin lines, that are spread out. I like the detail and shading of the muscles. but its something to try. also. i think the tree is what needs the most work. give that a little more love with some detail.
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