the "best ideas" in this scenario seem clouded. Maybe its just me but the last thing i think about is flowers, peace or lightening while taking a shower. Although, i would definitely would think about music.
surely the word 'come' can be used without people giggling?!?
I say stick with the original wording, the others seem too clumsy..or if not that, out of the others it could only be " I get my best Ideas in the shower?"
And I've tried to word that about seven different ways, and every one of them sounds bad now that we've established a dirty context. =p ("It flows better." "It's more natural." "I like come.")
But in all honesty, it sounds better. And let's face it: People with clean minds will like or dislike the shirt on its own merit. People with dirty minds will rate it higher because of the pun. =p
i don't want a tee about me being in the shower. but i love everything else about this! i think you should just have the cloud on the tee shirt, with a few more things coming out of it.
the shower concept is too random. i don't get ideas in it, i focus on washing my hair lol. but good job travis.
maybe you still want the shower idea, but may i suggest having the thought bubble coming out of a person riding a bike, or doing something else? ...no text in that case... sorry i just don't like the shower thing.
I think that it is a universal thing that people can relate to. In the shower, there are no distractions. It is only the sound of running water and you. Ever sing in the shower? I don't know, I thought that it was a cliche that was worth designing upon. Sorry, but the shower is sort of my concept.
Could we see what the design looks like with the shower shrunk even more? I'm not sure if it would make things stronger or not, but I'd like to see how it looks.
I like the colors in version 5 more, but adore the dog you added in 6 :]
Also, saying "the best ideas happen in the shower" seems like the ideas are being fulfilled while you're having a shower...
Im not saying you have to change it, and not trying to pull a whiney "no text!!", but with the shower and the awesome thought bubble, i think the design is really strong even without the text...and it might even distract from it a little.
It looks great, but without the text could be neater :]