Should I keep the text?????

for once i think that text is good on a shirt

cute style!

the text is just slightly too stylized imo (it's just a little hard to read)

fix that up and I think it's stellar.

I'd like to see the text smartened up a bi, otherwise. Nice work.

*bit

No prob!

I like the wierd text... the only word hard to read is shower...

"shower" looks like "shoincy"

you could maybe add a few more things coming out of the cloud too... i'm not sure what though (i like the plane!)

otherwise, it's a great idea and really well done

ahahahah

the "best ideas" in this scenario seem clouded. Maybe its just me but the last thing i think about is flowers, peace or lightening while taking a shower. Although, i would definitely would think about music.

Yeah, I was trying to think of some other things that could emerge. Anybody here have anything to suggest???

throw some futuristic lookin stuff in there, like bad 70's scifi laser pistols and stuff.

Gimme ideas on more things that could be coming out of the clouds...

You know what else comes in the shower?

Sorry.

[walks away]

^lol

^I swear to God......

I'll probably change the name.

The best ideashappen in the shower.

Damn the english language!!!

PASSIVE VOICE

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Change it to: "I masturbate in the shower."

Anybody have critique.

Ok.



Come, or thought of?



For the love of god please help me!!!

The best ideas happen in the shower? Avoiding awkward jokes is a hassel...

Happen. It's got to be. Its the obvious choice!

happen.

What about...



Occur or I get my best Ideas in the shower?

Also need some more ideas of things that could be coming out of the clouds.

Make the text white.



Also, this submission needs a dog with a space helmet.



Actually, every submission needs a dog with a space helmet. But this one especially.

No text necessary. Name the shirt Hotbed of Creative Thinking.

surely the word 'come' can be used without people giggling?!?

I say stick with the original wording, the others seem too clumsy..or if not that, out of the others it could only be " I get my best Ideas in the shower?"

I'm Ron Burgandy?

I agree that you should stick with come.



And I've tried to word that about seven different ways, and every one of them sounds bad now that we've established a dirty context. =p ("It flows better." "It's more natural." "I like come.")



But in all honesty, it sounds better. And let's face it: People with clean minds will like or dislike the shirt on its own merit. People with dirty minds will rate it higher because of the pun. =p

It is technically the correct use of the word.



The last one is getting too wordy for my taste. In any case the innuendo may be a selling point too, you never know...

Also, add whatever you can doodle (no juevenile ssniggering please!) to the cloud. The more the better.

Be gentle.

anybody????

Astronaut dog! Come on!



(It looks good.)

Ok, ok. I'll squeeze it in... but first, a different color scheme.

Different color options. Don't worry, I still have the other colors if you don't like this one.

i don't want a tee about me being in the shower. but i love everything else about this! i think you should just have the cloud on the tee shirt, with a few more things coming out of it.

the shower concept is too random. i don't get ideas in it, i focus on washing my hair lol. but good job travis.

other colors were better. blue and yellow.

Ok, thanks.

I'll end up subbing this with this as an alternate color.

maybe you still want the shower idea, but may i suggest having the thought bubble coming out of a person riding a bike, or doing something else? ...no text in that case... sorry i just don't like the shower thing.

I think that it is a universal thing that people can relate to. In the shower, there are no distractions. It is only the sound of running water and you. Ever sing in the shower? I don't know, I thought that it was a cliche that was worth designing upon. Sorry, but the shower is sort of my concept.

This is for you veranda, look closely.

I like the addition of the dog with the space helmet.



very nice

Like I said, it's for verdana

A DOG IN A SPACE HELMET!

A DOG IN A SPACE HELMET!

that's so cute lol

Glad everyone likes it. I tried to make him look like that dog from rocko's modern life.

hey thats pretty cool

More of you had better tell me what you think by the time I get out of the shower...

Yay! I love it.



I prefer the bluer color scheme.



Could we see what the design looks like with the shower shrunk even more? I'm not sure if it would make things stronger or not, but I'd like to see how it looks.

Holy crap, this is amazing! Wow. I like the more aqua blue you used. Submit this and it'll get a $5 for sure from me!

Thanks.

I like the colors in version 5 more, but adore the dog you added in 6 :]





Also, saying "the best ideas happen in the shower" seems like the ideas are being fulfilled while you're having a shower...







Im not saying you have to change it, and not trying to pull a whiney "no text!!", but with the shower and the awesome thought bubble, i think the design is really strong even without the text...and it might even distract from it a little.





It looks great, but without the text could be neater :]





i'll definately vote for this when its posted!

[ps] i like the placement you have in this version too :]

Thanks.

I subed it so keep your Eyes peeled.