You ever have those moments, when you spill and wish it would just go away? Or that it would've never happened at all?
Well wish no more :)

this is awesome!! i would just put the squigee in the middle of the stain to make it more obvious...it kinda lookd like he is painting it there...other than that great design!!!!!

Really good idea. Maybe the whole hanging cage instead of just the seat. Really cool.

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I really like the idea itself.

Maybe the stain could look more like a stain you'd get on your shirt, though. Right now it looks like some paint that splattered onto a table.

Maybe if it had some drips, or a trail of destruction left by a rampant meatball - that sorta thing.

Other than that, I like it.

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I appriciate the input, however I think for this design to keep it simple might be the best idea... Thanks for the comments please keep em comin..

I really love it man, but I do recall somebody on here having a design with a large squeegee taking off a streak of black from the black shirt and leaving a white under-layer. I'm not sure if that really matters, but i was wondering if you had seen it.

Yours is a lot more easy to tell what is actually going on, the other squeegee one was like a riddle to figure out what wtf the picture was of.

Nah, Thanks for lookin out though....

nice idea :)
i would take out the shadow though, it kindof bugs me

i made a shirt like this a while back...two of these guys squeegee-ing off letters on a shirt...they were on ladders though.

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Cool man, i like this. Good concept. I think...no need shadow. :D

Love the idea.. just wish the figure was fully rendered in colour instead of black. ...But I'd still buy it... ..on a white Tee please.
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I like this idea alot!
Very cool concept
I think it might look a little better if it was some kind of food stain, or a different color, i dunno. The brown splotch looks a little funny. But its a great design other than that =]

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Oh make a window and behind the window put organs.

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I think the food stain idea is really good.....

lol nice idea~~ bigger maybe?

love the idea!

i'd do it bigger

i really like this, wouldn't change much except removing the shadow.

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Great idea! I agree on remove the shadow.

yes, remove the shadow. maybe enlarge the image just a bit?

i'd kind of like it if it was a blood red stain instead. nice otherwise. ^_^.

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awesome idea! maybe try the guy a bit bigger? it took me a while to figure out what it was.

agreed, bigger guy.

but not too big

hey can you check out my critique. i just put a new version up. thanks!

this needs work.but i like the concept. may be if youput more detail in the man?