a young tree meets a lamp post for the very first time

that's really cute. maybe a hint of a sidewalk between them to bring it together?

awesome.

Awesome.

plz
http://www.threadless.com/critique/25238/Jeronimo

Neat.

oops lol there are actually 8 colors..
i'll fix that

and thanks for all the comments guys :)

Hah. It's cute, like it. I'd try a lighter tee or something to add some contrast to the design.


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just fixed up the color bit..no design change here

That's a good idea...

If you have time please send a few critiques my way...
Thnx

I like it. You might try adding highlights of purple somewhere besides the tree's trunk, because it looks a little out-of-place by itsself there. You could also try making the tree's face brown too, and maybe adding some texture on the tree with green.

Nice way of looking at the "concrete jungle" we live in now a days... a little too much green for my taste, what if it were on a tan/brown shirt?

Haha, my initial reaction is to laugh. But I think that you should make more use of all the colors in your design, designs with 7 colors are usually..more colorful. And the purple is a little stark, but it could be used to add some nice contrast to the scene. I don't know if it's too conventional but maybe using more of the brown color with the tree? I like the smaller design and placement on the guy.

this is cool!! good idea...but i would give it some more depth i.e. background, foreground, more detail on the pine something like that...other than that fantastic work!!!

Hmmm, I tend to agree that the tree needs some depth added to it, it's all a bit cookie cutter flat at the moment, but overall a balanced design. When I first saw it I was thinking Christmas, go figure. If you get a spare moment, share some love over here. Thanks and keep tweaking, you'll get there!

just as a principle, the lampost should be straight like metal and the tree can bend as much as he wants to!

I read your first comment that it's a young tree... .. I think that's crucial in understanding why a tree is confused about street lamps.... ...Therefore, I'd suggest making the tree a lot smaller and making him arch his back to look up at the street lamp. ...The age relationship is your story here. You need to clarify that better. Hope it helps. :o)

Please critique The Cupboard

kool idea.. i think instead of text u should put a picture of a branch in the werd bubble and a question mark.. it would translate better.. and make the figures smaller.. kool design so far def..

I really like this idea, made me laugh a little. Still needs some work. I think the words work fine to get the idea across. For some reason I think the light should be glowing.

Lol this is a fun one I like the color scheme But put some lines on the three so it looks more like a tree and not a tree cutout.

Crit mine plz "catile"

i like this. I'm never a real fan of text...maybe just have a question mark instead. I definitely like the smaller (guy's) placement.
keep up the good work!

add branches in the tree wld be nice but it's up to your discretion~~i wld say sub it

thanks for all the input :) i'll start working on v3

Cool concept

http://www.threadless.com/critique/16363/Milking_the_Music
http://www.threadless.com/critique/25396/Strong_Hand
http://www.threadless.com/critique/24968/Staring_Death_in_Tha_Face
http://www.threadless.com/critique/17608/The_Missing_Link

Great idea. I agree with The Cupboard, ocinet and streetlight51.
Also add a little depth. Thanks for the critique on mine.

-gave mr tree a pattern
-made a new tee color
-made the text a picture

not sure yet if i like the tree's pattern..i tried plain lines and he looked hairy o_O

please tell me what you guys think!! :)

super cute!! ^o^ lovin the expressions

maybe make the little twig in the speech bubble a tad thinner?

haha hilarious concept, love your thought process

bump?

I like the trees expression, but it looks like he's looking where the lamp post's crotch would be if he had one XD Try making him make eye contact with the post

Maybe try to smoothen up the light post and maybe give its face a little color.

cute characters! the texture on the tree was a good addition

I also think the tree should be making eye contact more clearly with the lamp post. and I think the face of the lamp post looks too dark especially since that color doesn't seem to be anywhere else in the design.

everything else is looking good though!

bumpity

I love their expressions. The tree does kind of look like he's looking at what would be the lamp's crotch area though, maybe have him looking more toward a stomachy area at least. The pattern on the tree breaks up that large green area nicely, it's much better than V1&2.

the pattern on the tree is distracting and looks like stitches/scars. w/o the pattern the two of them are more alike and takes the joke further.

Which were you before you were an old carrier of the tattoo of 28 years?

tried to make it so the tree wasn't looking at the lamp's crotch..

This has came along way from the first sub. Idk though I dont think i would wear it as a shirt. needs a little bit more work, I am not sure what though. But its a cool idea.

bumpp

should i just sub this then??

Great Shirt - I had to think about it for a second but once I figured it out, it's really funny.

So cute, love your style! I would buy it in green.

Great idea, I like it on the green.

I think you're ready to submit it~
The only suggestion I have (which I say to pretty much everything) would be to make the lines a little darker. That'd make it contrast more against the shirt.

I like it, though~ Good job:)

I like the substitution of a branch picture instead of the words much better and you made the tree more textured. I also vote green.

And, thanks again for the crit.

bedtime bump :D
i'll prolly sub this
but if anyone has any last thoughts...?

I think it's good as is. Sub it.

what about a little shadow?

yeah go with that the check mine out

maybe if you moved the tree's eyeballs higher up it would look like he was looking at the lamp post's face?

but it's just a small suggestion, this looks good!

gd sense of humour. sub

Yeah cute and original. Sub it. oh and I like the green too.

just made some changes to the presentation, i'm going to sub this version
thanks for all your help you guys!! :)

please come and give me lots of 5s :)

i like this one. definitely stick with the green. check out mine once more if you get a chance and tell me what you think.

I think its ready for sub. Good Luck!
Would you all please check out of my design

I like the detail on the tree now I'm not sure people will all think that is a branch maybe if it was bigger??

Crit mine "catile"

you may or not be getting a $5 from me.

i hope i do

good luck

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhh!!! SO CUTE!

i'd buy this for sure.

haha thanks you guys :)

Well done good luck

lol they are cute just dotn really get wat its saying?!

the tree is confused by the lamp post, and wonders where its branches have gone. it's kindof in the title

yah but why shes looking at her self? she shoudl be looking at the lamp post and enough said in ur bubble the gives

i see its steel lamp post right?

the tree is looking at the lamp post??

well my first impresion its looking at her self maybe u should have paid more attention to the eyes looking bit up i saw it as shes looking at her self,, u can change it if u didnt post it yet

ok well i did post it so ya

:O i love this so much!
my only suggestion is mybe some grasses around tree trunk

oh looks like you already subbed it tho :/

oh haha well thanks :)

cute. like yes, submit it ^^

if you have the time, go check out my critique and tell me what you think!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25832/gretel_likes_to_cut_and_paste

haha sub it.. looks great.. if u wanted to go the extra mile maybe u could add a street sign sticking outta the lamp post.. but it looks good like it is too

:) nice good job, I think there is nothing much to be done! it's good to go!

i like it! it's cute!

Glee! I like it!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28199/Tin_Hearted