I decided this time censorship was a good idea please lend me your thoughts and opinions!!!
Thanks

5$ change the tee color tho

I like where this is going, Maybe change the text to "censored" , and if the bear is in a more compromising pose? just my 2 cents.

Yeah its good, but it need something. I like wa5hwa5h's idea, also I have found on here that titles can be important as the design. I would play with the idea of him being BARE!

Bare Essentials.

Bear Bare!

the Truth Laid Bare.

Bare Necessities.

thanx for the suggestions

bump.

What does bump mean. I keep seeing it!

Bump means to put your critique at the top of the first page so others who have not critiqued your design can.... at least I think that is what it means.

I agree.. change the text. I like the drawing a lot... but not the eyes. Also, might be good to keep the outlines the same thickness around the outside.. .thicken the afrm lines up.

You might also consider slightly rotating the "Censored" black boxes in opposite directions. Hope it helps.

please score and comment on mine :
http://www.threadless.com/critique/24884/Fashion_Victim#v3

Got rid of the shadow, fixed the eyes, changed the text, and added a lil more detail. Thanks for the suggestions, and please keep em comin.

awsome like it on both black and white
submit

please check out mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/25293/Slug_vsPunch

lol. Agreed with black or white... or maybe green (like a forest)

bump

Brilliant..!! 1000% improvement .. . . ....Submit it...!!

This is excellent... nothing to ad here. SUB !!! White is my favorite.


please score and comment:
http://www.threadless.com/submission/171272/The_Puzzle

Loads and loads better! Well done. I think you could develop lots of characters and images from this idea, different animals and situations. good.

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Dude ... what is this "Bump" I keep seeing in the threads?

Please critique The Cupboard

bump is just a comment to refresh your design to the top of page 1 to get crit. by other people.deleted

Does he have an @ symbol as a belly button? Either way it is sweet sub sub sub!!!

if you have time
http://www.threadless.com/critique/25095/Video_killed_radio

bump

Rsrsr very funny. This face is awesome XD

Very cute!! LIke it on white.

This is funny. Submit it!

Kelly green is the way to go :)

Bump

very nice. sub!

love it!

nice and hilarious. Looks ready for sub. If you have a second, check out mine.

thanks for the comment (by the way yer avatar rocks)
cool idea! :) I just don't like the typo it doesn't seem to fit the style of the bear or the "usual" censored bars

I SUBMITTED THIS, PLEASE RATE IT THANX