Sweet T-shirt OR Sweet Tea Shirt?

It is a sweet t-shirt sir, but I'd lose the words. The joke is way better without them.

hahheh i agree with "AgentDick on Jul 17 '08 "

Ya, maybe lose the text, also the tea looks a little too live-traced.



If you have time, please crit mine:

A Space Monster's Unpleasant Dream

Same as the other guys.

Are the straws chopped off at the top?

ditto, on the lose the text



please crit mine

or maybe put the text on the glass as a brand name or something like that?



If you have time, please critique mine! new version!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25029/SoundFlower#v2

I agree with homer4lyfe label the glass!

also the straws look bad like.. incomplete



Crit mine? ty :)

if you lose the words, that glass had sure better come off looking might sweet tea-ish, which isn't happening yet. the straws look like cocktail straws, long island tea-ish. nice pun work though.

thanks for the comments guys

a new version is be here shortly

i lost the words and fixed the straw

haha Awesome!!

HAHAHA i get it! at first i was like whattttt.... and then i was like HAHAHAHAH



i love it

i love the pun... but the public will most likely tear you apart for livetracing. i don't mind it, but others aren't so forgiving.

This is awesome and hilarious. Submit this. Thanks for commenting on mine too.

where did you get the image you filtered?

the source is from a pic i set up in my kitchen

the thing about filtered photos is that they look like filtered photos. is there any chance that you could - instead of taking a photograph of your still life - draw it?

maybe a different color tee shirt?

I agree with ginetteginette, might work better if you illustrated it using this image as a template.

ditto to ginetteginette.

i like the pic....maybe its because i like iced tea. But I think you could do more. Maybe add some background image?

i think its good how it is... it has to be simple ... too complicated and ppl dont get it

single straw looks better also you could try what ngee says or maybe use an extra effect to make it look printed/copied or something like that

I really like it, but would prefer a different colour background.

more shirt colors and a packet of sweetness!

I like the packet (the white stroke, not so much) and colors, but really think it would go over better illustrated and not livetraced.

like the new sugar packet font. i would have to agree about the white.

I really like the contrast between the pink and the T colour ( I'm english hence the U in colour) on the olive green. would maybe work better on the blue and yellow if the liquids orange was another colour otherwise i would buy this.

ps crit me if you have time. Ta

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25511/Suzzi_likes_to_watch_Lion_burn

ohmagosh!! I get it! great idea!!