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v1 A Space Monster's Unpleasant Dream, 1408 days ago, click to expand
v2 A Space Monster's Unpleasant Dream, 1408 days ago, click to expand
v3 A Space Monster's Unpleasant Dream, current version








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Wa5hwa5h
Wa5hwa5h on Jul 21 '08
What's an unpleasant dream for a space monster like?

Surely they don't have uneasy dreams (I don't think space monsters have *nightmares*) about monsters and such, maybe they dream about their tax returns?

Maybe they have unpleasant dreams of purple jellybeans with faces? Dancing in a meadow with ice cream clouds?



Let me know what you think!! THANKS!!



Ok, so I incorporated a lot of critiques into v3, namely :

The Bedposts are now more 3d

I removed the floor as to make the monster pop more

New and improved raygun

The dream cloud is different, bigger

The dream is a lot crazier, more beans, flowers,

Poop clouds gone,

Monster now has sweat beads coming off him.



Thanks again for all your comments!!

Wa5hwa5h
Wa5hwa5h on Jul 21 '08
Oh, and I changed the placement on the Tee as well, do you think it's better than the previous one?
idrawrobots
idrawrobots on Jul 21 '08
Man that dream is messed up. I do love it though.
supertrooper74
supertrooper74 on Jul 21 '08
I think this is much better...all of the issues I had have been addressed.
Pavatron
Pavatron on Jul 21 '08
cool concept
Pavatron
Pavatron on Jul 21 '08
http://www.threadless.com/critique/24968/Staring_Death_in_Tha_Face
pinoyboy
pinoyboy on Jul 21 '08
cool



please

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25231/Green_Is_Everywhere
Skiot
Skiot on Jul 21 '08
I don't think that there's anything left to change, though I liked the mouth on V2 better. He almost looks kinda happy or relived with the open mouth he has now. Maybe have the bottom lip curve upside down instead.

The dream is much more over-the-top cute now too, which I like.

Are you still keeping the second pillow? or is that there to show that he's in a larger bed, normally for two humans?

Not sure on the positioning either, though I do kinda like him at the bottom and his dram going toward the center, but I think keeping the dream close to him like it is the better choice.

Over all this looks very polished and I like it.
Mountain Gnome
Mountain Gnome on Jul 21 '08
Looking good, placement also good. I have one further suggestion: Make him alone in bed with only one pillow and thus he can be centered in the middle of the bed.



Much improved, well done!
torturedtiki
torturedtiki on Jul 21 '08
i like it. definite improvement from the first couple. not sure about the navy shirt though... maybe it's just me, but i think there's a better color out there for this illo.
Wa5hwa5h
Wa5hwa5h on Jul 21 '08
Thanks for all your comments, they have been very helpful. As far as the pillows, I tried it with the one, but I guess I liked the 2 pillows better, maybe the space monster has a ms. monster, or maybe he hugs the other pillow with a tentacle when he gets too scared.



I''m thinking of subbing this as is, what do you think?
pinoyboy
pinoyboy on Jul 21 '08
doooo it!
Bacteriakat
Bacteriakat on Jul 21 '08
ahh i love the sweat drops that little detail looks cool and the dream part rocks (and the cloud look much better as well) also the floor looks better like this too

d-zign
d-zign on Jul 22 '08
That's cool concept mate. Very cool. I like it very much, don't know what to add :)



Pls score and crit mine:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/171272/The_Puzzle#

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Wa5hwa5h
Wa5hwa5h on Jul 26 '08
It's up!!! Check it out!!!
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dramaticcomedian
dramaticcomedian on Aug 02 '08
wow! i love it! only thing is could you make the music notes more circular? circles are more happy, too. and thanks for the crit on my jellyfish. it's really helped a lot! :~)
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Mochou
Mochou on Aug 17 '08
awesome mate! I prefer the scene of the dream should bit larger than the space monters. and thanks for your critics
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