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yebkamin
yebkamin on Jul 16 '08
This design originated from a trippy dream i had that involved a lone expanse of streat intersection roadsigns and a heard of flying elephant seals, i desided that if i ever were to form a rock band that this would be the title of our first album. The original artwork can be found here: http://yebkamin.deviantart.com/art/Elephant-Seals-Take-Flight-91719175
yebkamin
yebkamin on Jul 16 '08
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yebkamin
yebkamin on Jul 16 '08
:)
Purple Max
Purple Max on Jul 16 '08
Even yellow, I would wear this - smooth out the lines of the seals and you're there!
Adeline In The Sky
Adeline In The Sky on Jul 16 '08
I would totally wear this!! Make sure you keep the "Elephant Seals Take Flight" part on the bottom... the orange and the lettering adds a lot to the design!! :)
yebkamin
yebkamin on Jul 17 '08
thank you so much, do you mean keep the lettering in the presentation or include it on the shirt? I think you mean just keep it in the presentation but maybe I'm wrong
Something Pretentious
Something Pretentious on Jul 17 '08
I think 'fear and loathing in Las Vegas' when I see this- and I like it.

I could be seeing things, but are the seals and the mountains/road different colours?

Also, the road doesnt quite connect to the mountains, which bugs me. I think if you made the road curve more in a slight S shape towards that low section of the mountains, it would make it look more integrated and logical. Right now it looks like the road was an afterthought.

I dont know if it would work, but you could try adding in shadows from the mountins, give it a little depth. Love it, though.



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yebkamin
yebkamin on Jul 17 '08
s shape got it
AgentDick
AgentDick on Jul 17 '08
I agree, And I think the words should go over theroad near the bottom, but not actually on the bottom, you know? Maybe having it rap all the way around. That could be cool. I'd als spread your seals out a bit. I think they look a little strang lumped together like that. I love this design though. Really original.



Crit mine please, if you get a moment.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25046/Good_News_is
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