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v1 Deal With It, current version








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joTUCK
joTUCK on Jul 15 '08
for you optimistic poker players out there (if they exist)
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chelly
chelly on Jul 21 '08
slightly odd placement. also, the edges look super rough. you'd be a lot better off if you hand drew the cards and text.
Something Pretentious
Something Pretentious on Jul 21 '08
The font is blackmmoor, in case you were wondering, guitarslave. Also love it.

I like the play on words you've got going on here (actually, now that I think about it, that's probably where the saying 'deal with it' came from- semantics, though). I think you could add some guy in the back, distraught by his peice-o-junk hand, head on the table, type thing. I dunno. It's pretty basic right now. The white text really distracts from the cards, I would suggest making the text stand out a little less.



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Phinx
Phinx on Jul 21 '08
I don't like the spark thing in the back. And maybe make the font reach more towards the top and come all the way down to the cards.



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joTUCK
joTUCK on Jul 22 '08
yeah, the more i look at it i find things wrong with it that bother me.

i need to keep the concept but REVAMP the whole thing.

Your right phinx the "spark thing" sucks



this being my first submission i totally rushed it

TO BE CONTINUED......
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