Feedback :)?

i like it... i'm not sure if it would be better, but it might be funny to see a sad/suicidal bubble asking to be poked... just a thought, do with it what you will. ;)

Hahaha, very interesting idea!!! Maybe it needs little more work, but I don't know what... anyway - like it !!!





pls take a look: http://www.threadless.com/critique/24905/Peace_Off

I actually abandoned this design. But now, one year later...

a new version! :)



This design is inspired by facebook's "poke" function. I kept the happy smile on the bubble because looks more like a reflection and because i like the irony in it.



Opinions? :)

Bump :$

i really like this design! great placement. i would definitely wear it if it were printed

Actually, I really like it too. The simplicity really works for it.

Finally some feedback, feww :D Thanks for liking it!



Is is just me or does the bubble-blowing-thingy look weird? :P Anything else I could improve :)?

Since the bubbles are drawn kind of lopsided, perhaps you could give the bubble blower a more deliberately-lopsided look as well. Since you brought it to my attention, right now it looks kind of... misshapen, like accidentally misshapen. (But that's only being super-critical. I really like it.)

Alrighty then, thanks :D

Haha, imagine if the unblown bubble says "blow me" :P

Or maybe if it's a text on the handle of the bubble-blower? :D

"blow me"

It looks good on the white tee, but maybe try some different colored shirts.



If you could critique mine, that'd be awesome.

What do you guys think about the "blow-me" idea?

That might send it in the wrong direction. Maybe just "Blow".

Maybe. But I love the face and think you should add a few smaller bubbles that were blown first and now have "drifted away". Like the poke me bubble is veering towards us. The style and color placement is great!! Can't wait for the next version!! (certainly not 400+ days later!!)



Do you have a second?

me likey this design!

hahaha yeah "blow-me" might seem wrong to some but i think the design will overcome the awkwardness and they'll just laugh it off :D

i would buy this shirt without a doubt!



ah could you please take a look at this one? thanks so much!

I think it is quite cute lol!! The bubble wand looks a little odd though, but if you fix that, I think it will be full of win!! XD



Good luck!!



Care to take a look at mine?

Kawaii Ramen

this is awesome, i really like the simplicity of it. i'd wear it

this is awesome, i really like the simplicity of it. i'd wear it

This is funny but maybe add some colored dots around the whole design with out outlines to bring out the ones with outlines more. Also maybe you could make the "Poke Me" bigger.

And make the thing that is blowing bubbles alot bigger also. I think there are a number or colors this could work on keep going with it.



Check out mine plz.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50886/Dark_and_Shy_at_Day_Bright_and_Wild_at_Night

This is funny but maybe add some colored dots around the whole design with out outlines to bring out the ones with outlines more. Also maybe you could make the "Poke Me" bigger.

And make the thing that is blowing bubbles alot bigger also. I think there are a number or colors this could work on keep going with it.



Check out mine plz.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50886/Dark_and_Shy_at_Day_Bright_and_Wild_at_Night

Thanks for the awesome feedback! :D



I'm still working on the new version. And I promise it'll be finished soon ;) I'll skip the "blow" joke to keep it simple.



Stay tuned! :)

So...



I added a couple of small bubbles without strokes, and i fixed the wand. Also, I added 2 alternate tee colors.



Is the strokes to thick maybe?

Oh yeah, I personally think it looks best on white...

Ooops.. I mean: ARE the strokes to thick maybe? (i'm tired xD)

It's cute, but I'm not going to wear a shirt that explicitly tells people to poke me in the stomach. You know?

Hahahah, well "lil' soap" is worse :P It tells people to rub you on their butts :P

Fair enough. =p

Hehe ;)

Poke... oh, I mean bump :P

maybe all bubbles should have faces

the bubbles

Hum, I don't know, but I'll try that! :)

I like the idea of them all having faces! Maybe they're all laughing and smiling and stuff! This is a definite improvement from V1, nice job!!

And if you're not too busy, a comment for my second sub ever would be much appreciated!

Cool, thanks :D

Hehe! My design is quite similar to this one! Its the first time that I have seen this one! Loving the faces on the bubbles!



Maybe you can have one or two more bubbles on the top part of the t-shirt?

I think you should start off my filling the tee and using more of the space adding more bullbes with random funny faces would be great



Comment my design please

wicked design! check out mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/53263/B_A_Bananas#v1

http://www.threadless.com/critique/53264/I_Love_House_Music

http://www.threadless.com/critique/53469/hill_billy_Bob