Okay, Long story short there was a problem with this critique and it ended up forcing me to delete it. So the previous discussion is lost. I reloaded and this is not the current version, but I thought I'd put it up so people could see where I started.

Here is the new version in all its glory. I added trees around the bottom to break up the circle a little and tweaked the hair on the main witch.

I decided to keep the other two witches clones of each-other to make it feel like a subtle video game reference.

The farthest witch looks a little c/p. Maybe make it a little different from the right one? Change her hat's angle a little, maybe? Other than that I think this is definitely good to go.

I think the leaves are a way better touch to the shirt letting the viewer know that the hunter is hiding and giving the design a cool shape.

Crit mine plz.

I like it, if there wasn't a copyright issue it would be funny to add that laughing dog from duck hunt :P.

Good concept, nice clean design. I'd recommend the moon glowing? This is a shirt that would translate very well as a glow in the dark one... was that the intent?

Crit mine please? :D

Funny you should mention that. It had occurred to me to include a chuckling black cat, but I figured that was going too far.

No, I hadn't intended to have it glow in the dark. I don't think I'll pitch it as a glow-in-the-dark shirt either because I'm afraid it'll kill the design in the voting.

If Threadless likes the idea of making it glow, I guess that'll be up to them.

I like the trees also.
It makes me feel good to know the cat might catch a break with a soft and cushy leaf landing.

p.s. you are the best class specter ever.

Awesome. I love the attention to detail on the moon. This is great. I send er in.

Could you comment on the piece I submitted for critique?

I think it's time to push this into the running. Vote on it in about a week.

A really great concept, and fairly perfectly executed.