wahnbriefe (madness letters) was a collection of letters to friends written by Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche right before he was institutionalized.

this is a retooling of my previous design here.

I like the simple version as much as this one, if not better.
why did you think you needed to change or add?
Simple is usually better, more graphic, just a personal prefference.

please crit mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/24740/Poets_beware

I agree with SIGNFREAK

Ha, i like the stache you improved like olie! said, and i DID originally want some more stuff coming out of the head, but i was thinking random old-timey stuff roughly assocaited with the lore, like letters with things written clearly and then going into full-blown madness, quills, ink splatters, etc. nice stuff tho, can't wait to see it up again.

Hmm, this was my first venture into character work.

Maybe I'll leave well enough alone.

i like the stache.
it's like your design ages with time.
but it does seem a bit bigger on one side.