a GOLD fish...

with standard ink + GOLD ink at some areas

i accidentally deleted the previous crit for this sub. nonetheless everything has been improvised :)

gold foil

make "fine gold" in a light brown

"fine gold" text looks misplaced or overstating the obvious...

I'd put the text lengthwise with perspective on the bar if I used any text, I'd also figure out whats actually on a bar of gold and put that instead of "fine gold".

i had some hard time finding what text are usually on a gold bar. anyone got any idea?

nothing really.

people see gold bar and think "hey. gold bar."

no text really nessecary.

and much better that yay i think.

way*

nice visual pun by the way.

i would rather see it in an ocean tone shirt.

i was reluctant to put in the text because i want to use the gold ink to better effect...



thanks for both sets of opinion :)

cheers,



I think the style choice of the fins is really great!



I just google imaged gold bar and got plenty of examples... but I agree the text isn't neccessary. I would lose this text choice though

ocean color shirt.

i think its better and i can take away the yellow that originally made it looked like butter.



what you guys think? :)

In all honesty I actually liked it being all solid gold

V1 was better, both the solid gold and the separate colour for fins, highlights and bubbles.

minus the 'fine gold'?

*bump

yeah I think just lose the fine gold but keep V1 over this Version

lol niceee try black shirt,,,

and try add more details or strokes,,,,

You could write 999,9 on it? Nice style and I like it. I prefer V1 with a different Tee color and gold ink.

you could have text on it agains, instead of it being white just a darker shade of yellow so its more like a shadow than a highlight. and it would be easier to read

OH! as another idea instead of bubbles maybe it could give off gold coins.... maybe be a dumb idea, but who knows?

i think i will go with version 1. only thing left now is whether to put a 999,9 on it. 'fine gold' is totally out me thinks

how about a carat mark? (eg. "24Kt")

up for voting!



thanks for the critique.

please vote here!


thanks zillions