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this is my second design. I call it foolish ghosts, tell me how u feel about this shirt.
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It's reallt cute and funny. The white looks good with those shirt colors. the ghosts could be mistaken for balloons though.
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I think the ghost need work, they look like balloons or even sperm... I think they need to look more ghoolish
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okay, i'll try but i'm not going to stray to far from my original design.
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I agree a little more ghosty would be good love the simplicity
please crit mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/24740/Poets_beware |
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Good fun energy overall. Something seems a little off with the upper teeth of the ghost on the right.
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thanx i was thinkin about that , and thanx 4 the crit.
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they look more like sperm than ghosts.
but sperm can be foolish too. |
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than tell me how to change them so they look more like ghosts should i change the tails on some of them up.
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I was thinkin they look like sperm too...
hmm... I'm not sure what specifically you need to change to make them more like ghosts... other than the sperm confusion it's a really great design and looks nice on the blue. Maybe the other colour shirts need the tongues changed to colours that compliment each shirt. So yellow shirt gets orange tongues etc... Crit mine please. :D |
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maybe just make them more "ghosty". like the classic design, similar to pac man baddies, halloween costumes, etc.
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i'll probably do certain colors of the tongue to compliment the shirt colors.
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3 days later
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yea, it looks good but seems like its pac-man's ghost
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7 days later
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Cool design. I would do bolder outlines even though we speak about ghosts :) Nice work dude :)
Please score and comment mine: http://www.threadless.com/submission/171272/The_Puzzle 10x |
39 days later
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this is a really fun idea, but i think you should maybe think about changing the shape of the ghosts' bodies... same kinds of comments as everyone else, but other than that, it's cute and fun!
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Maybe making them more transleucent or something will help making them most ghostly. I don't think you should stray very far from your original design because I like how they are drawn, but the sperm comparison is understandable.
Will you guys take a look at my design? |
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