Got rejected, what needs to be changed?

The text is out of place, not sure how you could make it stand out less. Maybe if you hand drew the text instead of using a pre-existing font. Or took out the text all together.

not really sure what you are trying to accomplish here. why would the sun have a beard? is it a five-o'clock shadow? you'll want to lose the text entirely. did you mean there to be another shade of yellow around the black that doesn't match the shirt color? try to think of something that will help tell a story w/ this character you've created.

You don't get it.

Well explain then.....



It's a simple enough design, but I think that there needs to be a little more to it. Most threadless designs seem to be slightly clever... I'd prefer it without the text, but then it might not hold up without it unless you can give it something more.



I like his beard.



I appreciate your input too...here