My first try. Let me know what you think!

I love weiner dogs....but this is just a really simple illustration, copied, pasted and transformed. Make one of them different at least. They don't appear very social, and where are their tails? Also, make it smaller, and try other color combinations.

cool colors, try to add some more stuff to it. Its too simple atm.



Please critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24569/THE_COLORS_OF_POVERTY

i'd like this on a similarly neon shirt

yeah - totally awesome



supercrisp work - do what sonmi said too

yeah i'd have to agree... neon on neon would look slick

Thank you all for the feedback.. will work on it some more and upload v2 !

version 2, I gave the weiners some depth, trying out different color shirts, let me know what you think ! Thanks.

Noooo! I was really excited about V1, but I don't like the look of V2 at all. Though it was simple, V1 had a clean graphic feeling. The big center placement is also the best one, I think. The good thing is, you added tails! What I would change from V1 is maybe to better implement the idea of "socializing". If you could, check out one or two of mine too. Thanks!

Oh! Ok. I was just looking at my dog and I thought of something. Maybe the tails could be in different positions? Wagging, tucked, upright, and... something else. Just a thought to bring in the social element. :)

Thanks! I'll definitely give that a try, so as to differentiate the dogs :)

I like the symmetry and the colors are sweet but I think you'd be right to add some small identifying details. Maybe in the eyes? Raised eyebrow or something?

Maybe if you gave them tophats and monocles, that would give the design a bit more oomph.



Looks pretty good so far!

Ok, so I went back to the original graphic style for the dogs, but I added a few touches to differentiate them, one has a sweater, another a collar, and their tails are subtly different. Thanks to everyone for their input!

whoops.. just realized the colors on the green shirt should be the same as on the white one, will fix that for the next v.

Thanks to all for the feedback!

Here is v4, working on the colors/placement.

very funny! i would wear the white one.

Good, maybe make one of them barking?

Something a real dachsund(spelling?) lover would

proudly wear.

Let me know what you think!! Thanks!!

I think the composition could be more interesting. Now from afar it isn't totally recognizable.

i don't get this..

Antonio... very nice, I got the point !!!! To be more recognizable you could make the top dog smallest, and every next one bigger so you will point at the point :):):)...



please score and comment on mine:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/171272/The_Puzzle

Thought I'd throw this out there one last time, just so it wouldn't die. Kept the v1 image, with tails from v4. Let me know!

The blue shirt is definately my pick. I think I get the point of it, but maybe if you angle their necks upwards (or away perspective wise) it might be a little more clear, but that's just me.



If you have some time, could you see if the new sun design for my shirt is better now?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25229/The_Breakfast_Hotdog

AHHHH! I see weiners.........

Good Concept



Please stop by and critique my designs when you get a chance.

thnx

I don't know this market yet, but as a design I think it is great. this version is really better than the ones with dog jumpers, although I'm not sure if I wouldn't try having all the dogs wagging their tails - it could add an extra cuteness factor. The design also seems more powerful on the dark blue shirt, the green background seems to wash it out a bit to me. I think this shirt would sell well here in Germany, its the national dog after all!

WHAT?

socializing

lol...very cleaver...just fix up the teeshirt model in the bottom left and submit cause this is a good design, tee and concept. plz crit mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/25491/One_small_step

cool color combination, i think its a great shirt ready for submission.



check out mine if you get a chance.

like it a lot! the colours are awesome

Good looking shirt - I think you could submit this.



Could you stop by mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/26465/Cloud_Cuckoo_Land

Love all the bright colors!



The idea is cool too, and great execution.



I love it all.

Boring

The colors are awesome, particularly on the blue shirt. The version with the dog collar seemed to bring the point across a bit more clearly for me--perhaps use the v. 6 design mostly as is, but bring the collar back. Great design!

I like the illustration.



I'd remove the wagging tail lines, and make the whole thing a touch smaller on the shirt. Also, something needs to happen where the dogs overlap. Maybe try using a more neutral color to contrast all your vibrant ones?