Thought it would be clever from all angles, it being Hercules a greek myth and the opposite of achilles instead of the weak point it's the strong point and Achilles and Hercules rhyme....I don't know but tell me what you guys think.

i don't like yellow one though.. maybe light brown or grey.

pls critique mine

looks nice but i think you should take the dots out of the cement block because the rest of the design is clean and that makes it a little out of place



critique mine pleease!

but the dots give it a sorta toonish look to it, well that's how I saw it.

you should keep the dots!

Yeah, I like it on the dark grey, I'm not quite sure what's going on with the foot though? It kind of looks like there are two feet in one sandal.



Thanks for looking at mine.

i would defeneitly put it on the white or grey.Would you be so kind as to critique mine too plz

m.1 He's breaking a block of cement. How is that hard to read? Also those are toes in his sandal not a whole nother foot.

Oh..no that's not another foot m.1 that's a greek sandal XCD.



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I like the simplicity of it....what might look cool is showing the scene from a different angle....with the foot and brick coming straight at you....

i thought the romans were the ones who wore sandals.. not greeks.. i think thats what my art history prof said..

It's a nice illustration, but I don't understand the joke. Sorry :( Maybe someone can explain it?

Well I'm pretty sure it shouldn't be that hard for most to get the joke assuming most people on this site are 20 and up. But the joke is Achilles heel is a weak point I just twisted it and made it Hercules heel and since herc is so strong made it a strong point...get it? And the rest is explained in my first comment.

i get the joke, lol

mmmmm i think something needs to be done with the text, maybe make it bigger?

I like the illustration, but I don't know if everyone gets it right away. maybe put achilles on the back with an unbroken stone

I think putting the achilles on the back might be too much. For the people who get it I think they would get a laugh out of it but for the people who don't I think they may just over look it.

got a point there.

That's what i really like with the shirts I've bought, most people don't get it and it makes them feel stupid or they give you a dumb grin and a lame he, he

i really like the sandals!!!

Unfortunately I didn't get it at first, but after being explained I get it. I guess what threw me off was the emphasis on Hercules and no reference at all to Achilles. What if it said "Achilles Heel" but Achilles had a strikeout through it (line through it) and in a hand-written font, it said "HERCULES" above it?

Hercules sounds like Achilles so that's what supposed to ring the bell. When I say the "cules Heel" I feel like "achilles heel?" like that. But I guess that's not the effect it's having huh?

I like the idea. I think the un-filled foot and sandle clash with the filled brick. This could be really funny.

I think this sounds like it could be a band name, but for now until i get a definite idea from you guys I will do like little miss shortie said and maybe enlarge the text.

Made letter larger and clearer.

i dont think that all that many people know greek mythology enough to get the joke/want to wear it

I know Greek mythology pretty well, but it doesn't seem funny to me. It comes off as if you've confused about Achilles, or just as not funny.

BTW, they don't rhyme, since the Greek (original) version of his name is Heracles, which doesn't rhyme with Achilles.

I'm not sure I get the joke. There's something kind of fun about it, but I can tell this isn't the kind of thing that gets printed here.

it's okay, i don't know how you could improve it

draw a helicopter crashing into a skyscraper and exploding in the background. then i'd buy it