I changed the concept of it. It's a small but fun design to work with. I hope you guys like it.

How's it look?

interesting concept; i'd suggest greater contrast between the badge itself and the string around the neck. the hand is great





please critique mine as well? it's titled "chibee love"

Hmmm...I think its a bit big? as it's a simple design i think it'd be more effective smaller



Any comment on mine welcome: http://www.threadless.com/critique/24362/A_Simpler_Time

Made the string a different color and made the tag smaller.



Anything else I should do to improve the design??

Bump.

Buuuump

quite cool~ but it look too simple.

Um...that's the point. Simplicity these days catches the eye.

Added some font.

i say make the vip pass look more like an actual pass.. like it would prolly be vertical instead of horizontal..

o and VIP should probably be bigger

VIP pass to "I love you?"



Or did you mean the rock and roll hand?

Oh....wow...I got the rock and roll hand wrong....-_-....damn.

LOL I did the spiderman hand. WarDrobeInSpareOom you just gave me a great idea. But sadly it won't look as cool.

bwahaha.. o ya.. u def did get it wrong.. nice catch wardrobe..

ok, here's what I'm gonna do. I'm gonna make it look more real and I'm gonna twist around what wardrobe said. Thanks for the good critique and ideas guys. If this gets anywhere I'll be sure to mention you guys.

hey.. actually the pass should be moved a little bit downward on the tee.. it now looks like it's floating. do u know wt i mean? and pls look at my design again. i hv made some changes

i think make the "VIP" bigger and under the hand

I usually like the shirt color to come through but on this one I think the hand should be a different color.

Um...I mean the type on the pass...uh...I swear I was looking at a hand.

But it actually works either way.

I did the VIP PASS font by scratch.

I like, but don't know if this will get the macho guy crowd



please crit mine

little bit corny for my liking... i could see a same sex couple sporting these tees, but not the rest of the population

this is much better.. but u still coulda went with the rockstar hand

that was a complete turn from you previous versions.

the white tee works best. but the design could use some work. a little more "official-y", if you get me.

very corny valentines day card-esque. but i like those.

Um its cool but it may be a bit cheezy

Thanks for your critique. Much better than your last versions but heart designs are a little bit overdone. I don't think, it will win the threadless crowd (I haven't won yet and still looking for the right mixture myself to get my shield). Just hang out here a little bit longer and eventually you will get there.

i don't like it but I'm a man. put it on a pink baby doll t and maybe you'll be a millionaire?