simulated process.

remember kindergarten?

i don't!

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great! really!

would be thankful if you could crit mine...

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kabumpity

Great idea and I think you're almost there, but the image could use a little "cleaning up" on the fingers.

The transition from finger to turkey is a bit too "cut and paste" - the extra feathers don't flow quite well enough. I think keeping some of that "my kid did this" feel is critical to the impact of the image, but at the moment, there's a bit too much of it...but only in the fingers!

And if you get a chance to comment on my "Gator Love" critique request, I'd appreciate it. I like the way you think and could greatly benefit from your input on my image.

Thanks in advance.

love it

oh. i thought this was going to be a zombie t.

I think this is real good enough to print.

Crit mine plz.

thanks guys/bump

id agree with junosgold maybe take some feathers and build them up to teh one large one increasing teh size of tehm as tehy progress up to said solo feather

I had thought about some "webbing" to make the transition more natural, but then I wonder if I'm battling the preschool handturkey imagery too much?

I'll play with it.

now with webbed fingers.

Makes the transition to large feather/fingers a little smoother.

Let me know if you think it kills the hand look for you or not.

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I like this better than V1...is there a concept that I'm missing though? It's very odd....but I like.

rebekkathefairy- seriously? you never did the "trace your fingers and make a turkey" thing? robbed of your childhood much...

this is great. i don't really have any ideas on how to improve it. sub it i would say.

if you don't mind critiquing mine here it is
though don't feel the need cause it's not like i really critiqued yours persay...

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I wouldnt wear a turkey on my sweatshirt, but I think others would, and its a clever design. I don't really see any thing to crit, nice shirt!

oh hand turkey

do you folks prefer the "webbing" between the fingers for a more uniform turkey, or the "non-webbed" version one for a more uniform hand?

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I think that it is ready to go!

thank you/bump!

Wow! This is so cool!

This is five-fingered-discount types of crazy! The only thing i can think of improving this is it being submitted so i can 5$ it! Great work here man.

hey papaprime! this is lookin' pretty good. i do think that the webbed fingers look a lot better. this is a really neat idea. i can't really tell if the fingers have a shadow or if that is part of the feather though.

check this out for me.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/24511/RAINY_DAY

I like the webbed fingers too, that way you don't see the hand RIGHT away.

thanks folks, I've agreed with the webbed fingers sentiment and I've pushed it into the running here:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/170340/gobble

really fantastic design! great fun!

I'm not too crazy about the positioning of the legs. Doesn't feel like it's standing on anything.

Othewise.. great image and hopefully something like this can be printed on fabric.

thanks guys, I agree that the turkey is kind of floating. I opted for the floating look, as both legs flat on the invisible plain looked a little to squat for my liking and lost the little bit of depth that I think is achieved with the floating.

It was like voting for the president, I wasn't completely happy with either option, but floating turkey looks like my 08 candidate. :D

i like it with the webbed fingers.
it adds more details, but people can still figure out it's a hand.

making hand turkeys was one of my favorite activities to look forward to doing in elementary school. needless to say, yours is way better than what we did back in the day.

I think it is great, i just want to see a closer view, to view the colors, because you can't use gradient, and I am not sure your are using only 8 colors.

Please critique mine, if you can: http://www.threadless.com/critique/24484/ARRRR

love it!
please critique me :]
http://www.threadless.com/critique/21451/Facebook_phenomenon

I think it is great, i just want to see a closer view, to view the colors, because you can't use gradient, and I am not sure your are using only 8 colors.

simulated process.

haha that is a cute idea!

I may be wrong, hello... but I was responding to the person above you, not commenting on your design.