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I think it's a good idea, but the shapes are too polygonal and looks a little funny, like the waves.

duly noted

I don't understand what's going on here except for the hat,

Crit mine too plz.

Nice concept going but the colours might be alittle too mismatched? Maybe alittle less corners?

i think that it would look better in different colors

come see elephant v2... :)

I don't mind the shapes, but I would like it better if they were more consistent in the sleeves...like if one sleeve was just a vertical and horizontal flip of the other.

plz crit my real world v2

Version 2.
-Improved wave design
-Aqua t shirt color
-Fewer sharp corners

oh yeah these colors work way better together

maybe some rain coming down from his hand? and i don't know how i feel about him just standing on the waves. i do like these colors better.

spoom- i tried to make it look like he was in the background a bit, but i definitely see what you mean. it should be an easy fix to improve that

miss shortie- thanks i thought so too :)

bump

His sleeves bother me since the triangles on one are inside and the other ones go outside. I hope that made sense.
Very dynamic!

oh i see what you mean! ok that should be an easy fix... thanks for spotting that

Its a cool design...not quite my thing but different from thigns you see alot. Different is good. x

thank you!

Maybe to smoothen up a bit those wave edges?

hey!!!... yeahh... I agree if You want you can include some rain and fix the edges!!!... keep on going!!!...

better colors, nice and mystical.

standing on waves? yeah maybe remove them and have him upside down crying rain... not sure how but it needs to be cleaned up or improved to be submitted

i don't understand how you got 7 don't submits cause it is an interesting design. i say submit it!

if you get a chance please critique mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/24484/ARRRR

it's ok... i mostly ignore the check boxes anyways