Even if he knocks em down it's still unfair because he's out numbered. A little design I just did what do you guys think?

I like the idea. for sure. also how they look. just the text I wouldnt place there.

its a cool idea, but it could be executed better.

try doing some better coloring.



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/24068/Imagine_Being_Colorblind

Tell me how it looks with the shading.

Take out the text. I think the design can speak for itself.

Ok, now how does it look with the shading and without text.

How does it look without text and with shading?

Better. Now I'd say move it more towards the center, just so it's not hugging the edge of the shirt.

I thought it would look better as like a lining on the side of the shirt but I'll try center after some I get some more crit.

i agree with you phinx

i think it looks better how it is

cause if it was centered

it would look like something was sticking it from the bottom of your shirt xD

this placement is good (:

PS. Check out my final version of Antique 8)

orange is money in the bank!

Tired some blue and yellow. Looks good or not? Let me know.

BUMP

the yellow and orange shirts work the best and try moving the figures over to the left more, as it seems too far to the right of the shirt.



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It supposed to be sort of like a lining on the side of the shirt....kinda.

I'm not quite sure what it needs, but it needs something.

I like the little guys on top of one another, but the ones at the top that are in a straight line seem less detailed and kind of formless.

you know..that's true. I'll get to work on that.

are they supposed to be boxing? you could always make it smaller, add a ring, a crowd in the background, and have more clothing.

we could take this to the next level

this is very cool, i would drop the shadow as its not adding to the design and the guys along the top need the same detail is the ones in the column.

The ring idea might complicate things and add too much to the design. I tried to make it as a shirt lining down the side of the shirt.

I will work on the detail for the guys at the top. And I'll take out the shadow.....(buh bye shadow...-_-)

Hi, how abt trying to centralise everything? i lvoe the concept, but u can try working on more details? how abt changing the colors of all those tiny man? as to show a diff in the character? currently.. everything look as one

this is nice, i like the shirt, the oonly thing to me what u need to fix is add more detail to the top people, and i suggest keep the shadow.

perhaps you should add greater contrast to the shading of the people? the yellow looks great but i can barely differentiate between the shades of grey.



please critique mine as well? "Chibee Love"

Haha the idea of this is quite funny, I like this sort of theme, a play on the whole David vs. Goliath thing. xD

the idea is great. i'd make the tall guy's pose a little different thou, maybe a 3/4 view with his hands up ready for fistacuffs. i's also make the shadow a lot lighter or take it away even.

Try redrawing the tall guy giving an uppercut and move to the left a but it seems to be riding the right a bit much. I like the blue and orange colors the best.

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THey aren't really fighting the are just sticking their arms out to measure arm reach to see who would hit who first so I don't think the uppercut is that necessary. But I'll work on the guys on the top rwo. I kinda wanted it to be a shirt lining on the left to make it stylish instead of slapped in the middle.

sorry for being frank but looking at it i think its a lazy piece of work...

Phinx,



This seems more like a rough/sketch before the final piece. Keep working on making the figures more interesting and unique--that could be in the trunks, gloves, hair, etc.

The art work is cute and comedic. The only thing that really bother me are the guys extending from the head of the top character, I would try something else; like delete the extending characters. Build a couple more guys on top of each others. Create another character that sneeks up behind the single tall person and have it do something, ok

I agree with jamirko, the ones coming out from head don't work for me, need another factor somehow, david and goliath, the little guys need to have the edge somehow.

Oh, thanks Jamriko and Signfreak guys gave me a great idea!

Physically, they guys extending like that don't make sense (I realise how stupid that sounds, but it doesn't quite work visually, for me). Maybe have them swinging eachother, and then the picture becomes less static. The idea is really good, though. The design makes you want to look at it- so there's definately something there that's good. Would it destroy the simplicity for them to be swinging on ropes or something?

Crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24492/Go_Vampires

I hope some one laughs when I make the redesign. I hope you'll guys like it and..no swinging rope it will be pretty funny.

This is your strongest one. I dont like the way the little dudes are extending out, maybe if they were piled higher and sort of bending over towards him sort of candy cane shaped.

i really like the concept, but it needs something.. and the shadows looks a bit weird..



critique mine?

Ok took out the weirdo shaped guys. Gave the little guys an obvious advantage. And took out the other colors. If you think any other colors I should use let me know. And let me know if this design is good or not. Thank you.

BUMPZ!

I think the gun is a great choice!

Thanks!

Bump and goodnight!

I'm not really too fond of any of the color choices for the t-shirt. The illustration is cute, though.

I like the blue and yellow one. The orange and gray is iffy. But the illustration and concept is really good just play with the colors.

yellow on blue.



I'd go over the details of each guy one final time and really clean up the small things like expression choices, and line consistency and then I think it's great!

hmmm... I typed this at the beginning of that last post but I did a greater than sign and it cut this part out... so it should read:



Wow this improved a ton through each version.



The grey on orange (greater than sign) yellow on blue.



I'd go over the details of each guy one final time and really clean up the small things like expression choices, and line consistency and then I think it's great!

i like it! both color combo seem ok. perhaps i would draw the second leg of the tall man.

Ok I'll make Some more colors, any suggestions which color shirts I should put it on?? And I'l try and get the second leg in there and fix some line consistency.

Maybe give some more emotion to the tall guy. I can really see it on the small guys. Cool design and shades!

Yeah it's much more better than the last version. Like the little guy holding the gun.

I think it would be cool if you had even more little guys running up his legs like ants. Just a thought. Look'n good though.

I love it...I'd definitely order it . . ..if, the colour of the tshirt were change (something a little less primary colour)... and remove the mouth of the one guy in the tower who has a mouth... ...I think they look brilliant without mouths. ....Oh, and make the magazine of the gun slightly bigger and longer. .....Love the idea.



pls crit mine : http://www.threadless.com/critique/24884/Fashion_Victim

I added some colors took off the mouth added a leg to the big guy and fixed some eyes.



COPY AND PASTE FOR ALTERNATE COLORS!

http://i275.photobucket.com/albums/jj300/PJD1990/UFFATLS.png

I think his other arm should be down instead of punching.

And maybe you could add color just to his gloves and nothing else to give it just enough visual variety.



Maybe some more shading on the guy on the bottom, he feels kind of flat. Your shading on the tall guy is good.

Haaaaaa... this is niiiiiice. Also I agree with andrewd626 about the other arm. Try to put it down to see how it's gonna look! I would definitely wear it!!!



I put my design for scoring, so if you have time:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/171272/The_Puzzle

nice. yeah let's see him with his arm by his side too!



crit mine :D

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25261/Save_Water (thanks!)

It looks great. ....I see you lengthened the Magazine on the gun too. Hey, took your advice and added some colour : pls take a look.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/24884/Fashion_Victim#v3

submit!!!! mybe you should add color with the people tho! :D:D:D

This is awesome. You should try to see what it looks like with the other arm down. Other than that its great, i would def wear it.



crit mine plz thx =)

Submit it ...It's great..!!



Took your advice : Please critique The Cupboard

one suggestion: color the giant's shorts and glove red. It will make them pop out

I like the idea of haveing red gloves and maybe blue or red shorts. Great idea



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