any suggestions?

Love this image but maybe a bit mor eimagery. Try other colors instead of white for the shirt. I feel green may be your best bet for the image itself. Try casting shadows under him and maybe even place him to the left slightly and a bit smaller as the wing formations will balance more

critique mine if you would like.

Looks like you have a good start - seems like it needs something more, though. I'm not exactly sure what's going on. Perhaps you could explain what you're trying to get across and we can help.

thanks so far for your feedbacks. like the idea with puting it a bit to the left and that the wings could balance that out.



well he's sad cause one of his wings is a bit shorter. so thats a problem for flying. I also were thinking about adding a tear. but I didnt like the look.

^^ oh, I see it now. For a second there I thought he was just angled that way. Try some shading underneath for sure, and not on white. Some pointed tips on the wing tops would be cool, too, but that's just my preference. Good luck!

I tried to give it a shadow. but as I am a really newbie in indesign I dont know really how to do that. but I quite like it with this shadow now.



I also made the right wing a bit smaller and put the design a bit more to the left.



what do you think about the colors now?!

I absolutely love it. In my opinion it is perfect, in all your color choices, it is perfect - I would buy a t-shirt with this on it

I am glad to hear that. who knows...maybe it got printed one day. what I do really really hope :o)

its nice, try adding some abstract stuff in the back ground. I think that would really make it good.



crit mine plz?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24068/Imagine_Being_Colorblind

Maybe put the blue human-fly-thing on the blue shirt. I dunno, just a suggestion. But I think the design is pretty cool.

I was just thinking it might look good wit hsomething behind him. Like some vines or something, or just some interesting shapes or something.

I'd kind of like to see him crouching at the bottom of the shirt....but otherwise, he's great..



Could you critique mine? It's called The Family

thanks for your feedbacks. I will definitly try out some of these points.

in this latest version I put the butterfly now on the buttom and blue on blue.



ready for submission now?

who thinks that it needs some abstract stuff behind the butterfly?

it's nice but i think it needs some abstract backgrounds