This is a new design I created see what you all think.

nice idea and nice style. but I think you should change the part under the woman head. thats confusing to me.



thanks for your critique.

and give her a more female look

Ooh, hmm looks real nice and has a nice touch on the shirt.

Definitely nice choice of style. And nice choice of colors on each shirt. Like Lyocell said, give the woman a more feminine look, possibly by making the lips a bit more bulbous or rounded? And dim the chin down on the guy a bit... its just huge, haha. But just a bit, otherwise.



Just a few minor tweaks and I would totally buy this.

Like Lyocell said more female look and try some other colors.



Critique mine please



http://www.threadless.com/critique/23917/Look_it_s_a_Water_Buffalo

I fixed everything and decided on a color template. Tell me what you think.

i like it smaller and on the red. critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17086/Bipolar

Cool thanks. What do you think about casting a shadow

i think there is not enough difference between the male and female faces, they are both kind of masculine.

I think it should be a bit smaller. See how that would turn out.



Check mine out if you've got time:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/24229/Make_me_a_robot

Here I made it smaller and some people said they liked the red so I brought it back. I will work on the man and woman features more to make a contrast.

yes! i like the red! maybe just a tad bit smaller too, and not so thick around the woman's chin

I agree with rebleious about the chin for sure.



Making it smaller too. I would also do something a bit more delicate in the middle. Seems like over run to me.



Critique Mine Please

I think you need to more clearly define this as line or shape. You're kind of teetering between both right now, so it makes it feel awkward/uncomfortable. I think you'd be better off thinning everything up and making it a more detailed line drawing (in an art nouveau direction). I'd also consider the tee colors - maybe just tonal line work on a larger scale - the entire shirt maybe.

thins the chin send it up and left closer to the right shoulder cream and purple def

nothing really stands out to me and it seems flat... reading the above comments i'd have to agree... let's see the revision

I have redone the lady but in a wierd way but I think it looks cool. What do you all think about the new lady. I do agree about the compositoin ill work on that

Any thoughts?

New color and made much smaller