I have redone a submission this time it has bolder lines and is a wrap around. The lines are now more styalized. The wrap around feature is mainly to simplify both the front and back of the shirt (less clutter). I tried making the outlines blue and black both are in this version just for critique purposes. I will have one line color either black or blue in the final. Nail into it guys I hope it gets selected this time.
I don't really get it. What is it supposed to be? Also there seems to be an odd flow of movement. There is a thin horizontal bar of stuff on the bottom, with a diagonal line intersecting it at sort of a weird angle. Maybe if you play with proportions and movement it will make more sense.
I will Phinx. It wasnt rejected it just didnt get voted in the final votes well enough but I think it was because the lines were to light and the info wasnt really marketable. Even this one may get rejected because it is kind of complex for a shirt better as a poster design. But I m going to try again anyways.
I decided on a dark blue outline. I made the ladder more matchaeble to the size on the back I reduced the image on the back and brought it up more. What does everyone think.
