any suggestion are very welcome.



and if you have time, pls also check out my other submissions. thanks. merci.

I don't understand it. Atlas carrying a Rubik's cube?

the cube needs form- shadows, highlights, etc...

sure have been a lot of rubik's cube designs lately

thanks for your feedback, will try out the shadows, highlights and so on.



and I will also check out the others rubiks designs. didnt see them yet.

well the name of the shirt doesnt fit no more. compared to the first version this is quite a new concept.



I am really glad for your feedbacks. merci.

yea the name is real off now and I don't really don't get it but it flows real nicely on the shit just make it just a little smaller.

does it need more details?!

just realised that I missed to fill in the white color. thats done now on the big sample. I also resized it a bit.

Hey Lyocell, not that every shirt needs to make a statement. But I feel like you're trying to make one here, but I'm not entirely sure what it is.



And I'll be the first to admit that could be on me (I can be a little slow at times), and no statement may be intended. But I think that the confusion alone, for me, might suggest this will need a little more work.



I hope those comments were helpful.

salut mangalee



thanks for your feedback. I think its one of these designs that you can see a statement or not. If I look at my design I see different statements, and none.

It looks better smaller as for the statement I see none. It looks better on the olive and light blue shirt. Also make the black outline maybe see through instead of black so that the outline is colored by the shirt.

thanks for your feedback. do you mean with outlines all the black lines around the cubes or also these in the cube?



sorry I am not english so I am not sure what you mean.

I like it, particularly on the olive/drab greenish tone. To me it looks like both art and a statement. I see it a pretty, entertaining and ...it looks like a statement how all things evolve

yeah! its about the evolve. BUT not just only.



Atlas is carrying a round earth...and a time ago people thought the world is flat. but now we know its not. so here it is the first mistake...I drew the it square. the kubik is a math-toy. a genius developed it....and the kube is solved/perfect when all colors are completed. this kubik is not completed. out of the kubik comes some sort of the evolution-story.



but is it the true story our evolution?! or are we wrong once more before galileo galilei? did the scientist calculate it right? or does it just to be somehow solved?!



thats what my design could be about. but it is also just entertaining.

hope you get my message...cause I am not english.

Best with the olive shirt. Sumbit that one!



(Just make sure to add the white first.)

merci for your comments. the red square is out of place because it should look like "an open door" where the "flying-man" came out.



about atlas :o) well I think there are many different atlas existingen and they all look a bit different. but maybe I will work also on his body.



merci.

well yeah it probably would look heavier if it would be in a crouching position. but then I cant use the same guy for the ohter three images.



but thanks for your input. I do appreciate it.



about the red square...mmhh...will think about a way I can get that more clear.