I just wanted to get everyone's two cents about this design. Would you like to see other color options? Would you like the design to be multicolored or do you dig the one color print?

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out of these two options I like the red one best.
As a suggestion for color combo....
How about turquoise on gold?
A very positive combo that is.

great Idea by the way.

thanks Lonki - I'll check out that combo. Were you able to make out the individual phrases even though the whole design is one color?

I think you should keep it one colour, red looks nice, you could try it with different shades of green as well

red is not a very welcoming/calming color.

with the title and message being "be positive" you should use the most cheerful colors possible.

the graphic looks great.

I did manage to read the individual phrases, but it took me a couple of seconds to figure out that they were not placed as they would be in a book.
So it took some puzzeling, but I could figure it out.
If you do decide to use more colors, i would suggest making the color differences small, so the overall B image does not get lost.

Updated with four new color combos.

the yellow on blue would be my choice.

white on green for me :)

thanks!

Yes, yellow on blue please!

blue on yellow or white on green (:
PS. Critique mine if you have the time 8)

hmm... I'd vote for yellow on blue, but white on green and blue and yellow are also nice. Much better than the red, though. (and I love red)

They are all niiiiiice... very hard to choose which one :) Which ever one goes I will score 5

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http://www.threadless.com/critique/23757/The_Puzzle#v3

alright - i think we'll go with the green tee/white design and blue tee/yellow design combo. thanks for your feedback everyone!

Oooh
I love this!

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I like the idea a lot. ....only suggestion I have is somehow incorporate the + sign...

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