some zoo animal paratroopers, hence the 'paraZOOpers'...



still havent finalize on the shirt color. hope can get valuable feedback from you guys



comments and critique welcomed. peace to all and many thanks

Love it! Think this blue is best. I think the eyes of the giraf are tho high. Maybe you can improve the eyes of the top four animals. I do like the eyes of the eliphant and the monkey.

You don't need the airplane. The stile is to different

such a cute Idea!!!



yeah the style is way different for the plane, unneeded but cute!



the monkey is deff. probably the best one on there i would buy a shirt with just him hehe

The plane doesn't bother me. It's definitely not realistic so I think it goes fine. I would definitely include it though, even if you change the style because it adds to the narrative. The animals look great. I love the giraffe that's holding the chutes for each leg. I have no idea what that brown animal is in the upper right. I love the distorted style but I still think they should be recognizable. But overall the design has a really fun mood to it. It makes me smile.

I think it's good, but you need to take away some stuff. Like the plane and the weird animal in the upper left that olbeardy is talking about.



I would make the parachutes plain. Without decoration to put emphasis on your animals

crit me when you have a chance

it's a turtle! with his shell as a parachute! but he needs some eyes and maybe make his shell look more like turtle colors - some green maybe...cos i didn't notice the connection when i first looked at the art



please crit mine!!!

blue shirts cool, its kinda like the sky, mayb you could add some subtle clouds for perspective



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the monkey with the banana is key...i agree with concrete i don't really think you need the plane and the eyes are a little funky otherwise it looks great to me

work in progress, thanks for the input guys. i hope there will be more input before i put up version 2

updates:

added clouds

added another color to the turtle's shell

enlarged the monkey a little bit

changes to the 2 birds

changes to the eyes of a few characters



comments and critiques welcomed

~my respects to ya all~

added smiles to elephant n giraffe

The little monkeys make it super adorable, I'm not too sure what's going on but I love it. I say submit it :D

TOTL, here is what happening :) [taken from my first intro]



"some zoo animal paratroopers, hence the 'paraZOOpers'...



still havent finalize on the shirt color. hope can get valuable feedback from you guys



comments and critique welcomed. peace to all and many thanks"

nobody else? T.T

Yes this is a WIN! You should Submit.

Also check out mine and give me some advice.

Cool art!



Critique mine!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/23917/Look_it_s_a_Water_Buffalo

well the birds didnt get favorable notice thus i guess its ok to exclude them, and in their place i put in a pot of flowers instead, they are friends to the elephant and its like his personal 'luggage' i would say :D



the goldfish in a bowl has joined in the drop and giraffe has voluntered to bring him together...



its either version2.0, or version3.0, i'm not sure which one is more appealing to you guys...



pls advise...

Very cool!! I like it a lot, not sure if I have something to add here... nice, very nice!





Please comment:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24076/The_Puzzle

i like version 2 better, not sure about the flowers and the fish bowl? maybe some of the clouds could be solid fill?

oh and the 4th animal Im not sure what its suppose to be? the giraffe, monkey and elephant are obvious, but i think the top one needs to be made into something. very cute design :D

well i think this is the one that i feel most comfy with.



what you guys think?

nice wordgame...I like really like the monkey. sweet as a good banana... but I think the elefant and the other grey guy (turtle right?!) need a bit more work.



pls critique mine: "it is not fair".

oh dear, i just found out that i forgot to fix my turtle, it should be the one in version 3...



anyway, keep the input coming guys.



my gratitudes...

i dont really see a different between the turtle on v4 and v3?!

the belly part :)

true. didnt look enough carefully ;o)

Great characters.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/24132/Defy_expectations

hope to get more input before i put this up for running...

Add some sort of toenails or something to the turtle, it may help identify that it is actually a turtle. At first glance, I didn't realize it was a turtle until I read someone else's comment.



The title of the shirt is really cute as well, it may be cool if you could incorporate "paraZOOpers" somewhere into the design, but like, inconspicuously.



I'd also say add just a tiny bit more thickness to the clouds. And move the cloud that is in front of the elephant behind it. That cloud just sorta seems outa place, unless you intend for it to be there.

Agreed with Alva IV, try making a smile to the turtle.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/23917/Look_it_s_a_Water_Buffalo

the cloud at the in front of the elephant was intentional.

made changes to the turtle as well :)

i hope its heading the right direction

I just love it, it's so sweet. You have great style. I really like the small details like the flower potand facial expressions. Maybe you can add another circle-flower thing to the monkey's parachute for balance... But I say submit.

Crit mine too?

omgosh too adorable

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PS. Check out my designs too (:

love the new clouds the dotted lines work much better. I'd say submit!



Please crit mine

i need to bump this*

hahaha super cute. critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17086/Bipolar

bipolar disorder is a mental disability that has a lot to do with random mood swings. i tried portraying a bunch of different moods. AND they're magnets..bipolar har har!

Very cool! I'm pretty sure this one is qualified!



When u get a chance pls critz mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24205/Crab_Mentality

i see i see. thats my lack of knowledge there :)

wow i absolutely love your stye of work.. very cute!!! especially the monkey, hahaa. I think it's good to go! your illustration match very nicely with your tee-shirt color ;) good gob

thanks for the encouragement :)

the only thing is to add lines to make the turtle shell look more like a shell.

the clouds should be embroidered!

this shirt is adorable, the giraffe with parachutes on his legs made me laugh.

hahah very cool idea. looks great!



if you have time, take a look please?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/24229/Make_me_a_robot

*bump

another bump*

i agree with thedarrien on the turtle.

i only found out it was a turtle by reading the word somewhere. lines would help out a lot.

good job on everything else.

adding an outline to the shell will make the style differ a lot from the overall style... i guess some can see right away its a turtle while some cant...



but hopefully its enjoyable :)



many thanks for the input, i'll see what i can do

That's adorable! Maybe put one of the other clouds in front of someone/thing (the plane) so the one in front of the elephant doesn't look out of place?

yea maybe make the shell more notciable



Crit mine plz

hi guys. appreciate all the help during the whole crit of this design. you

all have been wonderful.


its now up for scoring and i hope you guys dont just like it, but love it.


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this link to score it.


my million thanks to all, again :)

i absolutely love Love LOVE this design! it better get chosen cause i want it!

one last day to vote! thanks guys