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v1 French Kiss, current version








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eillek
eillek on Jun 26 '08
Awww.....
reallyreallyawesomeguy
reallyreallyawesomeguy on Jun 26 '08
Yeah I don't know something seemes off. I like but not really.... I don't know what I mean
soapdisco88
soapdisco88 on Jun 26 '08
*love it *



The only thing is I think it might look better on the shirt if the people were smaller and maybe off center. Otherwise it's super cute~
TreesMakeTheWorldGoRound
TreesMakeTheWorldGoRound on Jun 26 '08
Sooo sweet.

Awesome idea.

I liek it on the cream best.

Maybe have little hearts coming out of it too.

Great idea.

Crit my cloud one?
Freakypicasso
Freakypicasso on Jun 26 '08
Looks great. I only have two suggestions.



1) The crop is awkward. You've cut off half their hands at the bottom. You either need to heighten the crop to the forearm, or lower the crop to reveal the hands.



2) You need more variation in line weight. That will give your design more interest and stability.
wendi288
wendi288 on Jun 26 '08
This is cute and great concept! But I agree that the crop is a bit weird. I think maybe you can try making it smaller and show their whole bodies. o_O And maybe get rid of the outlines of the vomit-y stuff would make it more organic and flowy? o_O
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