Oooh. Didn't know there was a new critique option. Let me know what you think. Cheers!

Oh, and the title is also up for revision.

sweet! well done. i ticked the sub this box!

Cheers bud. I wonder what other people think...

I think those lil tike cars occupy the highest percentage of yard trash in residential neighborhoods, they are ubiquitous.



excellent job.

Thanks. Do you think the title needs to be a little less duchampian, and a little more descriptive? e.g. 'This is pretty embarassing', or 'I won't be trying that again'.

Not sure what happened there. Please pay attention to version 2 only. I took it upon myself to add a 5th colour, and subsequently a 3rd dimension which was previously lacking. Feedback appreciated. Cheers.

Shameless bump before I hit the sack. I'd love feedback if you think it can be improved upon. Thanks.

the extra color is great. I have been trying to think of a title,

but nothing yet..... maybe "humiliating" or "thank god the neighbor found me" I meanthe design speaks for itself

Haha. Thanks ISABOA -will sleep on it and maybe produce a title tomorrow. Bon nuit! PS: Please mark 'submit this' on version 2 if that's how you feel. Version 1 'submit this' score has been creeping up, but Version 1 is yesterday's news, baby!

Good morning Vietnam. Just wondered what the early birds thought of my second attempt (Version 2). Muchos Gracias.

I've added a white accent to give it further depth. I don' think that I can do much more with without over-complicating it. Unless someone suggests anything... Let me know what you think. Ta.

I think it's really well done and a cute idea, the guy isn't dead, is he? He is kind of inexpressive, but I like is face on the other side. I think I would'nt wear it in a shirt, but I would score this high, so my opinion is sub it.

thanks for your honesty Pet. He looks a bit pasty, but whether or not he's dead is really in the eye of the beholder. Hes kind of looking defeated. I suppose dead is defeated in a metaphorical way. Cheers.

Bump before I submit!

i kind of liked the first version better. Either way, it's still good.

Thanks Colin

What's the difference between the two? I can't spot anything in the actual design.

ha ha ha thats funny as fuck! Brilliant really brilliant...ha ha ha. I keep looking and laughing. Good work. £1,000. :)

SemantiTheft: Version 2 has dark grey shade, and version 3 uses white for highlights.



Slapme: Thanks bud. Will probably submit soon. Just working on something elso at the mo.

Anymore for anymore?

Maybe he gets into a wreck, and the thing is all smashed up and that's why they use the jaws of life to get him out?

I think the shading and highlighting on the last version has too much contrast. It makes it look almost like camouflage.

Hmmm weird.. the same car at the same angle was recently submitted as a design.

Yeah - I think I know which one you're talking about J-Ray. I started this sub before I saw that one. The angle is completely different and I sourced the image from elsewhere if thats what you're getting at. Also, I left a comment on there saying I had started a design using the Little Tikes car before it had finished scoring. It's call 'Red Body Yellow Roof' or something.

I love this! :D Nice job.

Now subbed this. Cheers again for the pointers from the crit bloggers.

This is just gold!!! (so glad it made it to tee.)

hahaha!! you got me on this!...its really funny...nice drawing too...



Help me with this please