Nice hair, what's the placement? Crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/22634/Big_Brother

hair improvement...
do you prefer ver1 or ver2?

hrm.. mb if you could get the v2 hair to be a more graphic pattern?

ooo I like the hair but it does not suit the cartoon, the brown line around him is a bit thick for me. but fun idea.

www.threadless.com/critique/23799/Dark_Room

graphic pattern... yes... but couldn't the whole effect be better in photo style effect?

i'm a sucker for vector. i prefer v1. but with some shadow's in it.

ok guys i'll work on it in the week end ;)

meanwhile I have a tec question... when i will ready to publish this design from this critique... how could change the preview 100x70 gif image?

One thing to think about:
I'd like the eyebrows the same style like the hair... No matter if photo style, graphic pattern, vector style or whatever. ;)
But already like it a lot.

You are right stubbe... I miss cause I draw fast a version to upload the whole effect.
see you here early ;)

Hmm I think version one would be good but I like the white outline especially if it had a torn paper texture. This is a really cool design I wish i could see how it'll look on the shirt. Thanks for checking out my design.

omg i love his hair in V2 ... think you could do something similar with the pants and eyebrows?

please crit mine!!!