The idea was to have a rabbit pointing at a flying d20 and have the title be "de 20, de 20" a la airplane. However I am really bad at drawing d20's. I am hopeful that at some point it will click but until then I am hoping for comments on the overall idea as well as the rabbit, does he look ok, what colors would look nice, etc. That is all.

Awesomeness.

Why thank you supertrooperz.

I finally knocked out the d20 drawing so we are closer to what I want it to be. Now I just need to know what colors might look best as well as what needs to be done to finish the design.

I would probably title the submission
de twenty de twenty!

I don't get it, what's the correlation?

d20 dice are used for role playing games and the 20 sided dice is called a d20. I recently re watched airplane and while watching the part with the "de plane, de plane" I got the idea for "de 20 de 20"

I hope that answers the question. Unless it is about the bunny, and I can't explain that aside from the fact that he is awesome.

I just noticed the head between the ears looks a little crazy

you're joke is really out there. Since the "de plane! de plane!" is actually from Fantasy Island, maybe you should make the bunny (who doesn't really seem involved) look like, or even better, be tattoo (the character from fantasy island with the funny line)

nice
good call, I need to pay attention to what I watch apparently.
I will continue the work

Fixed the head added a bowtie to add the more tattooesque look. Checking my pop culture references before making them.

Any other thoughts?

hah i liked it without the bow, well u are never going to pleeeezz / appease the masses, and i dont know what a de 20 is :(

so more pop color and tee position and we are on our way!

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bigger d20, like HUGE d20

Once I got home I thought that the d20 needed to be huge, do you think it needs wings?

Man....
Bowtie
No Bowtie
Huge D20
Not so huge D20
and What color to make everything....

So many decisions

bigger d20

Aren't most D20 die red?

I like without the tie.

Try putting more tabletop rpg stuff in the picture. not too much, maybe like a figure or a rulebook or something.

i have no idea what this means, and i played D&D for 10 years.
is the rabbit throwing the die? Chasing it? is he a character in the game?

I also think it needs color, or at least some black areas. Doing the whole thing in thin black lines makes it look like an unfinished page in a coloring book.

needs color i think...

crit mine?

I am planning on adding color, making the d20 bigger, adding other tabletop elements (possibly a dice bag) and tightening up the overall design

I am planning on adding color, making the d20 bigger, adding other tabletop elements (possibly a dice bag) and tightening up the overall design

Bigger d20, no bow tie and some preliminary colorizing.

cOLOUR HAS TAKEN THIS TO ANOTHER DIMENSIONS.

make that d20 a tad bigger and you're good to go.

DE20 Boss DE20!

I really don't know about this placement, I think it might be a little to spread apart. Also the white shirt might not be the best though I think it really pops with the white.
Also it seems to be squished on the vertical axis when I upload.

I think, in order to get the full d20 die effect the die will need to be over printed with the glitter. Because the d20's I remember from my childhood where all glittery

De20 Boss De20

idk i think the die is to big

^ disagree, if possible make it bigger

i like the bunny though i think it should have more emphasis :/

your self branding ive noticed you draw the bunny alot so you should prob keep that going.

Bigger please.

anyone else? or anything else?
before the next version

bump the bunny

bizumpity bump said the little bunny

fine be that way....
just kidding

Make the rabbits ears bigger.
It's really good but maybe other background colours.
Maybe make the bunny bigger.
Good idea though.
Cute.
Crit my cloud one?

Here are some other color options that I have tried and kind of liked. What does the peoples think?

now it looks better, but I still have no idea what it means? is the bunny part of the game?
is he playing the game?

De20 boss De20....

I hope that help, it is from fantasy island

de plane de plane.

bump

umm, I understand that the large object is a d20. As I mentioned in an earlier version, I played D&D for 10 years or so.

but what does the bunny have to do with it?

Well he is a representation of tattoo from fantasy island, who says the de plane line(s). I attempted to add a bow-tie to try and make him appear more tattoo ish, I however didn't like the way that it looked.

The bunny has nothing to do with the game, as you probably know, and the attempts that I have made to add DnD type elements to the rest of the picture haven't turned out quite how I like to I have not put them up to be crit'd. I am thinking of possibly adding something along the lines of a palm try made up of different dice, but as of yet I haven't had time.

Aside from what you have mentioned prior, which color shirt do you like best?

you should make the shirt gold.

solid gold.

ok, well I would never have got that.

I don't think you're going to get a cartoon bunny to relate to Herve Villachaise, unless he wore a name tag that said "Hello, my name is Tattoo"

You need more references for this. Maybe if he was on an island, and was standing next to a gray haired guy in a white suit. But even then, WHY is he a bunny????

why not just draw tattoo?

Cause bunnies rule

OK, if I added a bigger bunny standing next to the little bunny on an island would that make more sense.

no

Ok...

bump