not sure?

I don't like the text color, font, or placement. I DO like the characteristics of the ghosted "only child" near the bottom of the shirt outline- is that handwritten? Try that in maybe... a darker shade of the pea-green. It would give it more of a folksy but lonely feel. The empty pods could be darker too, they're very hard to make out right now.

thats the 2nd version. the first version I did by handdrawing...this version now is in InDesign.



is it to clean now?

pls let me know.

I think it's too smooth and too green now. Old pea pod + new text = awesome.