I erased the early critic by accident :S thanks for all the past coments this is a newer version, hope you like it.

I do like it,

Try it on a lighter colour. and maybe smarten up some of the sketch lines.

It's a clever design but it gets lost in the monotone color. Maybe some spot coloring might help to guide the viewers attention in a certain direction. I think it'll also help spark interest to key parts of the design instead of making everything equally visually important. Make sense?

yeap... very clear.. i was doing a color test earlier in the design, i put some halftones to make more colors and i didn like it, so i'm gonna go for just some spot coloring like you say, thanks :D.

Even just some highlights could help immensely. Great design!

maybe u should work more on the details, like the coins on the floo, and maybe green would fit more to the idea (irish Aleph)
but i just love it !!

I think that design would stand out more if it didnt have the stuff going on in the background. Keep going and adding details, this is really good!

hey thanks, im working in the color right now, i'll put some color tests later.

ok more changes and color.. i still have another idea of colors. hope you like this... leave your comments :D.

much better than the first one, who ever said that the image got lost was right, this is a very excellent funky image.

i worked on this from 8.30 pm till 5.40 am...

it really shows, definately a marked improvement in the design!

thanks :D... i have to go to work in 40 min... :(

Adjustments are really good, I think you should take it off that soupy green background. It will stand out much better on a lighter colour.

oooooouuu the background. i need to change that thanks!

awesome design. i love it.

i'd hit it

ok this is the number 1 funky colors version

this is number 2 ...

oh there are no gradients its just the halftone that looks like a gradient... i'll try to put some bigger image so you can see details

LARGER IMAGE

http://img253.imageshack.us/my.php?image=teeluckybigv5dq7.gif

really like this one, definitely go with the yellow based one. I like the "softer" look and its much more classic. Maybe even put on an "age/washed" effect on it. The color/shading are definitely a nice touch although I even like the outline one too.
The green and purple ones seem too crazy and novel? The subtle but present look of the yellow based on is perfect.

The one on yellow is awesome. I actually do like the green one too.
I think it's a great design. You should sub this, it'll do very well.

I like the first one, would be nice to see it on a t-shirt sample.

I like the first V2

i'll do a final version with the position of the design in a T-Shirt, any sugestions?

great drawing, i think the muted yellow/green/brown combo was def my favorite. i'd love to wear this.

muy buen trazo compa, me gusta machin el dibujo, aver como se ve en la playera, y los colores?

This is creative art. Well done. It reminds me of one of those shirts you see a truck stop. You know, the one where the wolf and eagle are sitting on a cliff in a purple colored scenic view.

I like the first ones better-- no purple for me.

Yeah, the purple is a little too Mardi Gras. I like the original and the first color option, though.

Green and gold. all the way.

you took my advice on the rabbit feet i see. sweet.

definitely green/gold/brown. you want to avoid those truckstop/novelty/mardi gras/casino logo comments.

should do really well.

the yellow is the best for my tastes but the green is inspired and daring

ok one more, i just changed the background color and added some more lights and shadows, and added wore off efect.

I liked it without the fading

i can take it off no problem.

i agree, i think the drawing is stron enough to stand on its own w/out the fading. lookin nice though!

I think the fading effect looks pretty damn sweet. I like designs that seem old schoolish cuz of the wear out effect. Pretty nice, I voted for it to sub!

Oh wow, it's always so cool looking at people's work in progress. looks like a tshirt they would sell in stores, the grungy look. great improvements!

I like this version. Submit it!

I like this version or the first version best. I think too much color will take away from the detail you put in.

Wow, so much better than the initial one sagral. I like this on the yellow but without the fading effect as well.

wow! This is awesome.

you can change the color of the shirt and position of the ilustration by clicking on the T-shirts at the bottom.

thanks to everyone that comment on this design!!

i submited this ... :D

freakin awesome!!!

hey thanks :D

pending approval

I like V2 the best. My 2nd favorite is the 4th version.

Good work mate, V4 all the way, get it subbed!

well thanks.. but this design was scored a few days ago thanks anyway