This is a rough sketch of an idea where the milky way is made up of eyes.



I need some good criticism on this one, I want to tie it together a bit better visually. Right now the eyes look pasted on instead of part of the sky. Should they look more like they're on skin? Like this image? http://hirondelle.invazores.org/wp-content/uploads/2007/10/aeon_flux_main281.jpg



Thanks in advance for your expert input!

try using a darker blue instead of black

I donno.... with the real stars I don't think it's believable...



I think you should make them like mini eyes too



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thanks guys.



what if they were all the same style of eye instead of a wide assortment?

i think a wide asortment is better...i think going with the blue would make it belnd better as well as making the eyes smaller and make many many more of them! great concept though! keep it up!!

i like the assortment of eyes, but i don't like the differing levels of detail in them. the image you linked to is pretty creepy.



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I think your best bet is to model the mass of eyes using a buildup of near white stars of various sizes.

Eelvdave makes a good point. I do like the concept, though the backdrop of differing shades could be hazier, or gradient, and the eyes that are very circular in shape could be dropped in favour of the almond shape.

@Eelvdave so you're saying go from really small stars building up bigger and bigger as you get towards the eyes?



@raisedbytigers I think almond shape is going to be best, thanks.

no i mean stipple using stars as the dots.

oh you're saying stipple the eyes with stars? hmmm!

hey thanks for helping me ill deffinatly work on it but anyways i love this concept and the colors awesome work! =)

oh yeah. nice concept, maybe can try to make some eye bigger and some smaller? a variation :)



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Try using more perspective? Smaller eyes near the horizon and gradually getting bigger? Not sure if that will help but it might make the eyes look more like they are part of the sky.





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Cool concept, but I'd say you need way more eye-stars, especially small ones. Use some images of the milky way for reference so you can get that almost fuzzy, smoky effect it creates when you can see it on a clear night, which you can, if you're not in a city:)



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