Hey guys, I already posted a blog about this but thought I should go the official critique route as well. I think this is pretty much good to go but wanted to get some last minute opinions. How do you feel about the text, placement on tee, size of design, colours etc etc etc. If you could spare a few seconds to pass on your wisdom I'd be extremely grateful. Cheers!

I'd say it's good to go.

Thanks Tonteau

I like it. You could always take the gimmicky route of uv ink to take it to a new level... but that would be changing your original concept. Does it work on any other tee colours? Like black?

Oh yeah.... a less harsh version of the standard rainbow tones could be cool.... if that make sense. The cyan and green always make me grit my teeth subconciously. Sorry for the double post.

Nah, doesn't work on black. How do people feel about this kelly green do you think the safari green or olive would be more popular?

I am lovin it...nicely done. I am also right now working on a chameleon shirt...but I have to say...till now your chamelon looks nicer. cool idea. submit it.

I think I prefer the original kelly green but wondered what you guys thought of this kind of approach. More popular with the Threadless voters or less popular?

This is such an awesome design! You don't have to change anything... ohh wait, i saw the head of the lower chameleons... looks a little bit strange...

I like the army green a bit better (v2) than the kelly green. Otherwise, I like it!

I like it! it's so demential!
but..have you used vanished colors?
can you?
however ready to go!

You don't see many tees with dialogue. From a writing standpoint, I think you can delete all the dialogue except, "I can still see you".

My $.02

Thanks for the feedback guys. What about the olive versus kelly green conundrum?

Bump

lol i like it on this color . . but maybe mute the rainbow a little...

i agree with NerfDawg you really only need to have the other saying "i can still see you" (maybe rolling his eyes?)

check mine out. . .

I like the color of version 2 better. I also really like the idea of the shirt, but I think less dialogue would be better. Good overall though...

Please check out mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/23186/Vampire_Protection

The army green is definitely better. Good design. I like it :)

Check out mine please and thank you!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29924/Road_to_My_Heart

Ah I love this! I think i love the fact that the chameleons name is mike more than anything! submit!
and also if you could..... http://www.threadless.com/critique/29955/pastards

i like this green, and the bottom chameleon looks like his forehead is outlined where it shouldnt be (compared to the other chameleon).

comments appreciated:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29937/I_can_see_right_through_you

just realized this was a submission revived from 4 months ago. seen like 20 revived critiques in the past 2 days.

this is very cool, sub it!

Very nice.
I think the more olive green in this one is better.

Critique mine please.

My Heart's In The Sky

Awesome! I love version 2!

i don't like the words on it....at least do word bubbles....

fun idea though.

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