Go ahead and rip it apart I guess! I'd appreciate any thoughts on composition, possible placement/color selection, and how much I suck/rock. Thanks to my genius friend Helena for awesome inspiration.

rofl. Love it. $5

Aw, all these "don't submit" votes! Why do you hate it??

Also, der, i forgot to change the text to a lighter color! It says "I pluck on the first date"

You've got a great concept going. What if she looked more like a real chicken? Not too much, but something that gives you more of that weird cross-species vibe?

one little thing that's bothering me is make the lines of the toes shorter or make the toes fatter but those look like theyre fat at the beginning and then really skinny at the end it just bothers me.

I'd submit it, the type's a bit dark on dark. I'd agree with "briligg" and make her a bit more chicken like... Nice work and thanks for voting for Refined State

I think you should change the font.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/75488/Alice_in_Wonderland

Congrats MaGoogals, you've just invented necrospam.

Wtf.