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v1 Milkshake Heartbreak, current version








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jenraskopf
jenraskopf on Apr 17 '07
So far it's just a sketch of an idea I had after getting stood up for milkshakes by someone who shall remain nameless.



Any thoughts... y'know, other than finish it?
AsStarsGoOut
AsStarsGoOut on Apr 17 '07
heheh thats funny.





give her some curves, the one that brings all the boys to the yard.
realslimnatey
realslimnatey on Apr 17 '07
3rd times a charm boobootittyfuck
cherrylimeade
cherrylimeade on Apr 17 '07
make them clear cups so they look like milkshakes without having to tell people the title
The Wee Straggler
The Wee Straggler on Apr 17 '07
That milkshake needs some cupcakes.



I dunno. I think the tear is a bit overboard. The face is expressive enough and rest of the drawing tells the whole story. It's like you wrote "This milkshake is sad" on there. I say lose the text.
jenraskopf
jenraskopf on Apr 17 '07
3rd time eh? We'll see. I've already got my pillow prepped for crying myself to sleep.
thenakedape
thenakedape on Apr 17 '07
:) nice profile, haha.

in this sketch both cups look feminine... that's cool and everything, i'm all for freedom of human/milkshake sexual expression.. just thought i'd put it out there in case you weren't aware... oh my how condescending that sounds. (sorry)

That boy in the cap, he is trouble. Do you think he had something to do with your own standuppage?

I think that the tear could work, if you could make it look like a drop of collected moisture running down the cup's surface.

I dunno, without an explanation, I don't really think that your illustration tells the story of your bad date.

Kinda cute though.

Don't cry.
Sunshine69
Sunshine69 on Apr 17 '07
both cups look feminine to me. I don't think you need to make it obvious that it's supposed to be a milkshake... it could be just as funny with a soda in the cup. Maybe put some curvy lines or something on the cups... something a little generic and decorative.
noponies
   noponies on Apr 17 '07
yep, curvy lines will make it milkshake like. Give the boy cup a moustache, or some stubble..
The Wee Straggler
The Wee Straggler on Apr 18 '07
Umm...I'm reading it as two miss-shakes. The foreground one being jealous/upset/lonely because the background one is getting all the attetintion IE "bringin all tha boys to tha yard"



Of course boy or girl doesn't really matter...I mean it's all creamy deliciousness right?
jenraskopf
jenraskopf on Apr 18 '07
Hahaha. It is two female milkshakes.

AsStarsGoOut and Wee Straggler got it right.



It's not telling the story of my being stood up, that's just how I got the title.
The Wee Straggler
The Wee Straggler on Apr 18 '07
I got it right! What to I win?
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