That's not a draft...that's already the finish version. what do you think about it?!

mmm sweet sweet sinful apples.. american pieeee.. i think it needs something else in the picture.. i dunno.. maybe a snake

bwahahaha!

thanks for your comment. mmhh...a snake...will try it out, maybe.

Holy undraftness, Batman!

what does undraftness mean?! dont understand it..

lol. I love it! I hate the orange though...

think of word, attach the prefix "un".

nice think of word, with the "un".... I have to think about that. 13 people say don't submite it...nice number also in a christian way. lol lol

Also, the word base doesn't work. You probably mean basis.

also - the story of adam and eve is found in judaic and islamic teaching.

The lettering is really poorly done. It looks like you did it by hand?



If so, you need to pay more attention to the space between the letters (see where nity in Christianity is too close together) and the stroke weight of the letters (see "pp" in apple, and others)



It also looks as though the whole text block is tilting down, to the left.



Casual lettering is fine, but it requires as much care as rendering sans or serifed text.

@skeev thanks for that...yes I probably meant basis. I am swiss so...



@whirzle1 mmhh...so I could write something like..."is the basis of the three biggest religions"....



@campbell graphics: yes I did it by hand...first I wanted that the whole thing looks really poor...but I think I will go over it and do it better.

so I set it up in a new way. how is it now?

ready for subbing!

no it's totally perfect

y'know... the apple...

I get it. Yeah...submit it and I'll give it 5$

Glad you corrected the wording on the first one by the way.

thanks for your feedback. :o)



ok, I will sumbit it. right now. but till now all my designs (about 5) got declined. let's see what will happen ;o)

basis

I am the "basic"?

don't you mean I am the "basis"



I think the apple has lost it's meaning now. Maybe it should be "I am the rock..." and draw a pic of a rock.