Third design :) please comment!! thank you

Yay random crane! How many colors did you use? I see about a million. The placement is also too corner-y! I'm partial to placements that go just over the heart when the design is small like that.

this is great....fix the number of colors and make it big and centered

A million? I can only count about 13...which still makes the design unworkable.

the bird's very pretty but those clouds, shirt color and the size need to be changed. :]

I do hope you will re-do this with the allowed number of colors, because I like it otherwise.



I agree you should lose the clouds (which is one color down right there). Also agree it would be nice right over the heart. This would also be neat with one of the metallic colors that I hear is available. I have a lot of metallic origami paper; I think that'd work well with this.

2nd version: moved the paper crane, took out clouds and sky, added 2 little paper cranes, took out some colors so its printable, um...added more t-shirt color options

please comment!! thanks

it needs some life.(brighter colors,brighter shirt)



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it needs some life.(brighter colors,brighter shirt)



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it still has 6 colors including the black

maybe add some of the patterns back in...that's what i liked most about it

i liked the first one a lot, but i saw there were too many colors, would recommend trying to keep the patterns, i agree with lily-n-parker that it is what i like the most! but pare down the colors...also, i like just one with the clouds, not the version with 3

I really loved the patterns, you could try with just the 5 colours, and maybe a brighter shirt colour? it's looking good though!

i think you should have a play around with lighter shirt colours