Okay guys... I've only been doing this for a month or so and most of my submissions get a thumbs down. But if ever, EVER I had an idea I thought you all would like, this is it. Be honest, please, but I beg of you - please be kind.



*Sniff* You're a tough crowd *sniff* ya' know?

By the way, I don't know how the chicken in the do-rag got that grey smudge on her cheeks. Something must've gone wacky when I shrunk it and reduced colors. It's not on the big working version, though...



And what do you think of the title and thumb? Please and thank you.

At least I got the smudge off... Okay, so what do you think?



What about the thumb?



Title?



Colors?



Paisley vs. Floral?



Please and thank you!

Oh. Before you ask, yes the one on the upper right is a supposed to be a joke about hairy hippy armpits.

I think the "hairy" armpits aren't necessary, they don't come across as such. I'd like to see more color color color, it's all about psychedelics. some purple small round glasses would be a nice touch (John Lennon as ref), as would a joint in one of their beaks xD!



Now the peace symbol would be rockin' if it looked like grass to give it a natural touch. Also a crown of flowers on one's head would be cute :P~

the peace symbol don't really go well with the chicks.

thanks

What about this?

i like version four much better.

I liked this version better too...

Which one should get the Lennon glasses?

The one on the left 8D!

Now if I could just spell "Hippy" right...

maroon or brown?

Brown...but the art looks really pixelated.

It is spelled "hippie"...right?

I'm assuming you made this in MS Paint...am I right? If so, the file you made probably isn't going to be big enough to print.

Um...no...



Paint Shop pro.

Okay... better?

I like the brown shirt, vs. the maroon in prior revs. Is there any way you can connect the bird in the forefront with the background peace image? Maybe have the slightly overlap so they are tied together. Right now they look segmented from one another and not tied together.



Otherwise, I think it looks good.

What if I make the sunset bigger.

I freakin love this

Well, here is the version I finally submitted. Thanks to all for your feedback!



I'm sure I'll blog if they accept it.

It was submitted to da' man under "jammin' with hippie chicks" and the thumb is different, so keep your eyes peeled. I like the pillow fight a LOT btw Jess...

Check it out!!!!

hey matt...

i would say this is ready for submission..



crit mine?

only thing i would add is a female model