Hey, it's my first attempt at a design. I know it won't make it to production, but I'm interested in some critique either way. Thanks!

I'm interested in the placement?

here it is with placement!

really cute, maybe without the dotted line outline?

please critique mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/22547/Bombs_Away

hm. no feedback = good design? who knows. I'll go ahead and submit it as a design and see what happens.

HEhe... what if there are scissors trying to cut out his dots like coupons...

He has the right expression for it.

giraffes and palm trees don't relate, but this is cute nonetheless ^^

not sure if i get the palm trees and dotted lines, like kresta's idea -dotted lines around giraffe. good luck!!

Hm. They were supposed to be bamboo, not palm trees... though i realize that giraffes don't eat bamboo either. different plants, got it.