Love is war, babe!

This is cool! It makes me laugh because it's two totally opposite things (the heart and the army tank) but they go together really well!

Thanks!

yup everything is fair in love and war I love this

Submit

I love the concept. Just hilarious and so true. The colors go well since it is a tank afterall. Submit.

You could have cupid looking out the top of the tank. It looks cool without so it's up to you.



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Thanks Summers... I guess I'll give it a try!

v2 in the oven :)

super cool, just work on the graphic a little. Looks a little clip art at this stage.

I followed the suggestion to have cupid looking out on the top.

Placement on shirt is the same as v1.

What do you think?

graet idea.

better the 2nd version!

I like it!

maybe on the back in small print: cupid's new toy? Or is that clear to people?

Very nice, I love it and the colors, what would be size and placement? I might want to buy one. :)



please critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/22547/Bombs_Away#v2

hmm, maybe make the treads go sideways? I know tanks can turn, but seeing the side might be more interesting.

It's much better with Cupid looking out. The heart needs to be taller and less flattened-looking. The thing that looks like a crescent moon is a little distracting, because it forms such a recognisable shape. The placement of the shapes feels a little unbalanced; the gaps between white areas sometimes seem inconsistent, and are definitely asymmetrical about the wheels - you should definitely fix that.

Hey, Charlie, You can see size and placement on v1.

Acheman, I'm taking your suggestions in consideration, thanks!

I'm also working on a slogan, concrete and Jess.

Thank you all :D

This is really cool.

I like it!



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It's good. What is that halfmoon for though? Also, I'd say it's better with Cupid looking out.

Well... it wasn't supposed to be a halfmoon, but since you're the second person to point it out, maybe I'll misplace the circle in the front so it doesn't look so. thanks!

Cupid out is good, but you might want to try putting a heart through the arrow or an arrowhead sticking out the turret end because it may not be recognizable without the title.

HA!! I say have the "trunk" of the tank be an enormous arrow...

What do you think...?

I dig it. I think it would be cool to see the heart in a military/stencil style.

otherwise, sub it.

Well... I'm not completely happy with this heart yet...

I think the placement makes the wearer's right side look too heavy. I would make the canontower thing look more "out" towards the viewer. I know it ruins the simplicity but it makes it take up less space.



Hopefully you understand what I mean, if not, sorry English is not my first language so sometimes it's hard to express what I mean :-)

Be sure I understand you, but I think that, like you said, it would 'ruin the simplicity', which is the other thing I aiming at, besides the heart! :)

I would actually like it more if the heart was the color of the shirt instead of red, and if the text was on the shirt. I'm probably in the minority though, cause people here seem to hate text.

Auki, thanks for your comment.

I wondered if this design would look better with the text but I'm not sure of it (not because I hate text, just because I feel the design speaks for itself).

Anyone else is free to critique. :D

C'mon guys...

oh, man...

It is just me or this is a blank design...?

ya its blank

ok. I'll upload it again... thanks

i like A in version 4.

maybe the arrow tip is red as well?

So... I followed some suggestions and came up with these two versions. Please critique. A or B?

Thanks

perhaps the heart tip a tiny bit smaller.

also, the treads on the tank treads....have the lines closer to farther apart to make it have a bit of depth?

i like A in version 4.

maybe the arrow tip is red as well?

Right. But you prefer A or B?

Got it. v4 and v6 are the same, actually. I misfired F5 and ended up with a blank v5 :P

I'll try a red arrow tip as soon as I have more feedback on "A or B".

Thanks a lot

B IS AWESOME!



i prefer b,

i think it's the stronger design :)



could you critique mine if you have time?



HERO ME NOW

A red arrow tip and red helmet :)

Thanks avete. I'll try it as soon as I have more feedback! :)

I still prefer the 2.V. too many hearts in this one.

But you must admit... the heart arrow tip is a nice touch. ;)

Like it, however the heart pierced on the turret clashes with the idea of it being a tank....

the heart arrow tip is cool. NOT into the pierced heart. it overpowers the rest of the design. the red should be used subtly....



i think avete's idea of a red arrow tip and red helmet would look great. (which would create an implied line triangle between the 3 red elements, which is good design IMO!)

Thank you all. I'm working on it!

Now with red helmet and arrow tip!



Is Captain Cupid ready to roll?

Oh...And there are two different tracks design. Please tell me which one is better in your opinion. Thanks!

looking good!



(i still think the arrow tip could be just a TINY bit smaller.....but thats just me lol)

I like it!!



The only thing is, it's slightly unbalanced to me... Since the red is such a standout color perhaps you could add more somehow to the right side of the image? I think it'd be easier to do that than turning the tank around or something like that.

ill, Cpt. Cupid likes EXAGGERATED... so is more likely he won't miss the target.. hehe

Panther, I'll try to think of something, but the fact is that Cpt. Cupid is aiming at the tee user's heart, so I can't put anything else there... Any suggestions?

Thanks again!

The only thing I'm thinking of is like a 'return fire' and there are lots of heart arrows coming back xD Althought that destroys pretty much the really neat idea you had.



I'll try and think of something fun though :P

ill have to completely disagree with everything panther said, lol sorry panther ;p



i think the red arrow tip is the biggest red image on the tank, and gravity-wise it feels like its heavy....like its going to make the tank tip over....



hence why i said (i still think the arrow tip could be just a TINY bit smaller.....but thats just me lol)

i like the design B best!

cute design!

hey, hippie... are you talking about V6?

i like B.. kool idea

Lovely now!



Just for ha-has', consider a heart over where the wearer's would be; and cupid aiming at it from one of the shirt's lozer corners???????????????????

cool! nice concept!

Does anyone think the helmet should be white?

I do!

(message from brother invading your computer!)

ya helmet would look kool in white.. maybe there could be a target crosshairs thing over the heart area where the tanks pointing?

Hey Gelatin, I'm taking your suggestion in consideration. Thanks!

i like it don't change a thing!

Great concept. I think if you made his helmet white it would make the tank look unbalanced, but i like how the white looks... i like gelatins idea

bump

Following some suggestions, now Cpt. Cupid aims at the wearer's big and red heart.

I love it!! It balances the design a lot more and it's so cute!!



The only thing is, is the 'cannon' looks more like a cannon now than a large arrow. And I don't know if you still liked the arrow look since this is Cupid...

hmmm...I like it, but the arrow tip couldn't be red. I'll do it.

Now with the arrow tip.

Comments?

Me gusta muy mucho ^.^



I think it's ready to be subbed!



Just curious, is army green the only tee color you're offering it as? I personally would love it on a light pink or perhaps a light brown.

Well... Maybe I'll try some others colours and see what happens. Light brown sounds cool, but I think light pink would call for a higher contrast (and I really don't want to mess with the white).

Thank you very much for your comment (again) :D



And please keep them coming, folks!

Icy... I didn't find light brown on the threadless tee template. And now that I think about it, I like it so much in army green that I couldn't go for another colour.



I'm almost submitting it... if only I got more of these excellent feedbacks.

i really like the latest version. i think it is ready and it looks great in army green. but...what about olive green? nah...that's a bit too light. submit!!!!

I like the design and it's just about ready to submit...although after looking through the different versions, I rather liked the idea of coloring the heart-shaped tip on Cupid's tank round (the "arrow" in the end of the gun barrel).

oh yeah...and if you get a chance to comment on my latest version of my critique request, I'd greatly appreciate it.

Thanks, infamous and junosgold.

About the arrow tip, I think the design would look weird (a little overwhelming) with it in red (in the actual version only) since it's a colour that draws so much attention. Maybe I'll put it in another version and ask for votes. :)

woow. Lot of versions. And it gets better and better. I like it.

Well... Final touches.

I wonder if you prefer the arrow tip in red, and a little detail on the big heart.

Feedback is highly wanted here! :D

print meow!

B! totally go with b!

Thanks, Gengis and Jem!



bump-a-dee-doo

I like B best





please critique mine: Water vs Worm

B looks tight

This is the final version, folks!

Should I push the red button?

bump-a-dee-doo.

feedback needed :D

i'm picky i know...but i think the barrel should be pointing directly at the center of the heart. rad design!



critique mine?

Oh, you know... Captain Cupid is still aiming. Remeber he must take into consideration some variables, like wind velocity, distance to target and the amount of passion it needs! :D

Thanks for your comment!

:D

Neat Design Critique mine please!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/23238/Pink_I_EWW

Good...I don't think you don't need the text (in case you were considering adding it to the T-shirt version)...I think most will get it without the text help...



And maybe that's some advice I should take on my Alligator T, as well...hmmmm

spark....hmmm...maybe. Thanks for your feedback! :D

I agree with making the barrel shorter and aiming directly at the center of the heart.

Ya, point the barrel right at the center 0f the heart, and then submit it! I like the colour it's on as well. :)

Shorter barrel, aiming to the center of the heart...

Do you think is ready to go?...

I think it's ready!! Love the highlight on the heart!!

I say it's good to go.

You are really nice. Thanks! :D

I say you should submit it.

I'll sub it for voting tonight! Thank you all for those helpful comments!

I really like the position on the t-shirt and the style!

Ready to go!

Thanks, Stepantoz!

Pending approval, folks!

Thanks a lot for your support, comments and excellent feedbacks!

I say submit it...it looks great, the colors work, the angle on the gun barrel works and the whole thing "feels" great.



Also, thanks for your input on my Gator Love thing...I'm horrible at vectorizing (my drawing skills are terrible), but after 2 days of wandering through virtually every page of this site, I think your comments are dead on - photorealism doesn't seem to be this site's "thing".



Oh well, give the customer what they want, I suppose.



Do you think I should cut the text?

V1 rocks

Humbas, this is looking finished.



I love it. I'm going to watch for it.



Submit already.



Thank you for all your support with

Rocket World



I've submitted this one so please come out for the vote once it's approved.



Thanks again.

Thank you. It's already pending approval!

And the official thanks are at Aim for the heart

:D

Oh that's it.. Nice!

looks great!



let me know what you think of mine



Thank You!

Hey guys!



Captain Cupid is already up for scoring:







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I love it so!!! i voted........i wish i could vote some more haha



deff. hope it wins! would so buy it!

Thanks a lot, Hayley! :D

sweet design



crit me when you have a chance

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