Heheh, cute :D

I don't know what to suggest other than typesetting the text properly. It's pretty nice.

I think it would be pretty cool if the spider and text interacted a bit. Maybe if you have the web going through and sticking to the text and the spider hanging out the bottom of the text. I think it would give it more of a completed look.

Thanks guys, how about this one?

I liked the text in the first one better- it was easier to read. I think J-ray just meant changing things like spacing between letters and lines of text. For example, the U and the P are touching but the spaces between the E-R-H are quite a lot bigger.

a grammatical suggestion: contractions need to be consistent throughout a sentence. If you say "don't" -- you should also use "you're"

And yes, I was referring to fixing the tracking and kerning (space between letters). The handdrawn text is okay but i think they white line from the spider is interfering with the white text.

Good luck!

Thanks again guys, I'm actually haven't notice that the spacing of the text got problem, the original setting already look like that.

Anyhow, I have revise it, try have a look :)

PERFFFFECT! Pretty style! =)

Like the first placement, text on the left! =)

Haha.. Terima Kasih Jemae!

The drawing style of this sub is a bit different with my previous sub, feel glad you like it.

Jemae, like this?

Sama2...Semoga yang ini akan berhasil! Yes, I notice that! & still love it! Good luck to you! =)

Thank you :D

Yap! I think satu hari I kena belajar dari kamu! kerja kamu sungguh pantas! saya masih belajar tentang illustrator dan hanya sedikit pengetahuan dalam photoshop! sebelumni saya cuma lebih kepada freehand drawing/painting! =)

Haha... I still got a lot of thing to learn actually.

No problem, just email me if anything I can help. You got my email address right?

Actually nothing special for the software skill, just do more practice ;)

And your art are really cool, I like the detail you always did in your design. Keep it up!!

Change the rendering of the text. What do you think?

Thanks for your kindness! I think I'll go with this font style cos it's more original! =)

Jemae ;)

And thank for the suggestion from WanderingBert too!

Add on a thin line on the spider!

Now it's beautiful! PERFECT! Don't add anything anymore...if not it's will look messy! I prefer clean design! =)

OMFG Amazing.

Haha.. Jemae, I think won't add anything more. The work for the background web really make me crazy. I really respect the patient of the spider...

I think I won't have any design related web anymore, it's damn tired...

HaHaHa...but this worth it! It's Pretty Awesome Design! =)

Hey thats cool. Nice intergration with the text. A lot better from V1. Good work

Yeah, hope is worth ($2000), lol...

Thanks very much Bert, I took your suggestion ;)

Pray for you! Good Luck! =)

Thanks Jemae, good luck to your F1 subs too:)

dont know what to add, I think I like the simplicity of version 4, but the web idea is nice

Not yet! Still a lot of work need to do on it! ….. from the comments i got, they love to see the cars in deferent angle/perspective with more details. But you know melah...too slow on this! maybee you can tell me the short cut/tips, Hahahaha! =)

Ste7en, I agreed with you. But the voter always looking for soemthing tight better than a simple stuff.

Jemae, acutally i think the detail of your F1 design is good enough for me. Just need to put some work on the perspective of the cars, the rest is good!

Short cut? Cut off some car maybe.. haha

=)

Sorry man, can't help for this. I think the only short cut for the perspective is using a 3D software, it was thousand time easier than the hand draw.

Its OK! don't worry mate....i'll try my best!...=)

You did a great job on this FM - the webbing is really cool - I am also glad you went with the blue shirt.

This is very well done Flying Mouse!

Yeah ISABOA, I took your suggestion ;) You still remember the starting version of this idea? lol.... I try find a right way for this idea, finally came out this one.

Thanks Artdrops ;)

yay!! I'm glad you took this route because it makes the whole thing look complete... I think it's ready...

Yes Mela, thanks a lot!! Your suggestion is work :D

This design is special, I have took so many peoples suggestion and combine it into this design, finally came out this one. I like this feeling, and I love peolpes in THreadless, lol.....

PERFECT! =)

make sure you give it the best publicity you can... =)

Jemae, you already gave me 3 "PERFECT" for this design, seem you are really like this design, haha.... I will gift you one if this design get printed then, haha...

Agree with you, Mela. Publicity is my weakness, though.

Oh Jemae, don't forget to give me your 4th "PERFECT" when this sub up :D

SUREEEEEEEE! =)

all of these are awesome. love the spiders web and the shading on the spider makes it look alot better. nice