Comments ?

nice. have you played with making the blue ellipse a vertically narrower shape to get it to lay down ? nice anyway.

yeah that's what i did in a way.. doesn't it look weird?

It's a little funny. but it is still working in the capacity of a containing shape.I was thinking, bring down the top edge of the blue so that it makes a horizon behind the fish and cuts through the lily. bring the bottom edge up past the lowest petal. an amorphous shape something like that that suggests the changing reflecting water surface. so it would lay down as the water surface rather than look like a rubbed out view of a foggy window. I don't know, it looks pretty good any way.

I like it. It 's different from what you submit earlier

I'm thinking about actually cutting the blue puddle off now..?

What do you guys think?

i like it.. just not sure on the placement..

downer? on the side?

i'm not very comfortable with uncentered images

what about keeping the water color the color of the shirt instead of blue?



Please critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/22294/Human_Footprint2

New version. Is it better?

Hmmm...

nice

I like it much better without the circle!

This looks beautiful. I would submit as is.

Thank you guys for your useful comments!

It looks good on yellow, purple, cream... Unfortunately I can't show them all.

I may submit this one

Cute! submit!

Sub'd

c'est de la bonne, comme dirait madeleine!

Great !

I want to show it to my godfish , he will be red ashame

I mean goldfish