ok.. heres a design idea i had.. i need sum ideas and feeback.. lemme have it..

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I love the idea, it's fantastic, but I think it has too much stuff in it. It's distracting and I almost didn't notice they were legs. They legs themselves are perfect though.



Me too?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/21667/Power_of_many

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i think it has a little too much going on too.

maybe get rid of the arrows or the moon thing. and i couldnt tell they were legs at first either.

hmm i think ill make the arrows shades of blue so they fade into the backround

Yeah, try to make this design fade into the tee color (which is

blue?) and it would be cool. Maybe all one color (all shades of

blue)?

hmmm.. ill think about that NJ.. ill see if i can pull that off..

k heres a new version.. i kept as much blue as i could.. lemme know wut u think

bummmp

Love the legs, the sign is clever but would look better W/O it.



I see how your trying to blend the road in the bottom but the half tone doesn't fit. Maybe just bleed the road into the foreground.



Like the traffic light and street signs a lot. The moon.. maybe make it the size of that big blue circle and fade it out to a little darker than the lighter color dominant blue.



Looks sweeet over all.

hmm ill take that into consideration for the next version

sexy legs :) good idea

thanx alot

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I like it but I think I like the colours from your first version better

dead sexy

Damn this is really dope and creative. Combining words are cool

i don't really like the fading dots on the road



maybe the first sign is too big too..

Wonderful design but I'd ditch the moon haha.

intersting idea, but maybe change the sign to something women would want, instead of a hot chick, I think that might make more snese.



Please critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/22294/Human_Footprint2

this is awesome, but I say lose the text.

awesome job!



take a look at mine??

i like it!

women like other women..

yessirrrr

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I like the woman sign just maybe not have her chest stuck out quite so far :)

love the design and the colors, but i agree, the moon kinda dominates the picture, so fade it out or take it out completely?

Dude, this is freakin awesome.



Critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/22384/Capture_the_World

sexy city!

not bad

ah forgot, the shoe should add a reflection, otherwise is too flat

Version 2 does look a lot better, really nice design :)

i agree, the moon is overtaking

hmm.. maybe if i got rid of the face on the moono?

moon*

smart and catchy.... loose the moon .. its sort of scary ...

plz critique mine ...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/22791/Ya_pa_da_papa_doooo#v2

I find this a little sexist. Could just be my women's college-roots speaking, though.

could be

this is sweet

i love it!

I don't like the pink traffic light though... : /

Genius idea man. Very surreal and cool design but maybe change the moon up a bit. Otherwise great job.

i think you should change the text and change the placement/size of the sign. Also i don't like the dots on the larger end of the road.

cool idea

thanx.. ill take all the advice into consideration for the next version of this one..

Really clever, but remove all the text. The pun weighs down the image

Nice concept. but i think the moon should not be there.

neat design. maybe without the moon though? and i think i liked it better with the yellow

getting there. i would lose the extras that detract from the legs. i would have the legs to the right almost caress the moon.. as in tuck the moon inbetween the feet a bit more. lose the sign to the right. it takes focus off the sweep of the legs. i am a minimalist so take my 2 cents in stride.

i would have to say that i'm not so sure about the design on the street. i don't think it's necessary, but it is pretty neat. you should try another version of the street and what if it continues in the background. and like CORNFU touch the feet to the moon.



critique please

http://www.threadless.com/critique/23056/tape_fixes_everything

well...actually...what you kept the street desintigrating like that, but made that effect a litte shorter.

Hey this looks great, the legs, moon and idea and all. Im not crazy about the broadway sign, it stops my flow of vision. What does it look like without it? Maybe take a look. Good work!

i like the idea a lot, i think you can get rid of all the stuff that doesn't communicate the concept. (moon, dots, pink sign, maybe even the traffic light?)



critique mine?

looks cool.

i think you need to work on the signs a little bit. maybe darken the color tone, it pops out a little bit too much. and work on the text, maybe if you dirtyed it up a bit or made it look worn as if the sign's been the for a while.

Hmm... I LOVE the concept. Maybe the sign could say something like "Womanhatten Next 3 exits."



And I like the face on the moon, except her upper lip looks a little like a mustache.

ya it kinda duz.. this designs on hold anyway

i really like the halftone, but i don't like the moon or the green signs. really cool design overall.

Awesome man your good.

thanxx.. this ones prolly never gonna get done tho.. i lost interest

Man I really like you style. I just need to see the placement on the shirt.

ha i really like the execution of this

i just don't like the blue circle as a background



as if that's a lot of help...

ya i had an idea to change the circle into cloud looking things.. but this ones on hold until im interested in it again..

Very nice! i think it will look better in light colored shirts. nice work!



When u get a chance pls critz mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24205/Crab_Mentality

You should make one of the legs look like the Chrysler building. Then you could ditch the "welcome to" sign.



And for the record, I'm a woman and I don't think this is even the least bit sexist. Don't let anyone else tell you otherwise.

clever idea, nicely executed.

i like it :)

oooo i like this one

i like this one also!

See, I like the moon...

If anything I'm not a huge fan of the welcome sign - but i don't mind it being in there. If you like it, go with it. but yea -solid.

Nice idea! I don't like the moon and the welcome sign, however.

Other than that, I think it's awesome.

Please take a look at mine.

Nice, sexy and funny idea.

The moonīs lips are rare, maybe itīs for the darkblue.



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